Ancient Warrior
A Poem by
Poetic Beauty
Whispers swirls
Within midnight air
A bite stings my face
Icy fingers of death
Stroke pale soft cheeks
A shallow grave
Gives no peace
The shadow dances
Lurking in the beyond
Slightly visible
With a misty form
The vanishes, gone
Ancient stones
From a tragic time
Mark the spot
Of a warriors decline
No fancy marker
Or grand statue
Stands
Only dirt and rocks
Cover this man
Earth once covered
With crimson blood
Where wild flowers
Decorate the
Forgotten flood
This specter
Dances between
The past and present
Waiting for the girl
With eyes shaped
Like a crescent
© 2011 Poetic Beauty
Author's Note
Artwork by david howard Johnson
Reviews
This piece has a nice rhythm to it, and the words only add to the beauty of the painting. Well done.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Your words add so much meaning to the image
Posted 13 Years Ago
Your words add so much meaning to the image
beautiful poem that captures the magic in that picture
Posted 13 Years Ago
beautiful poem that captures the magic in that picture
Amazing artwork and poetry. I like the description and the story in the words.
"No fancy marker
Or grand statue
Stands
Only dirt and rocks
Cover this man"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
Amazing artwork and poetry. I like the description and the story in the words.
"No fancy marker
Or grand statue
Stands
Only dirt and rocks
Cover this man"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
hauntingly beautiful story...........
Posted 13 Years Ago
hauntingly beautiful story...........
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Great vivid story telling, love the imagery!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Great vivid story telling, love the imagery!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Excellent, poised and almost reminisent of the story 300! well done, good read.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Excellent, poised and almost reminisent of the story 300! well done, good read.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Excellent job on this poem. The wording and the imagery is awesome!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Excellent job on this poem. The wording and the imagery is awesome!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I really like the story in this, has a nice mystery to it. A very enjoyable poem to read.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I really like the story in this, has a nice mystery to it. A very enjoyable poem to read.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on October 16, 2011
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Poetic Beauty corn country, IL
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First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind.
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