Resonate Forevermore

This is how love should be. A complicated romantic thought.

Glide along the planets

With me as they align

Our beings into one unit

Raise your hands and shine

As we produce our own ballet

Creating a moment

Where time isn’t relevant

Letting the clock freeze

And the ticking dissipate

 

Dance with me in the cosmos

Of time and eternity

Sing with me among the living stars

That glitter with indefinable magic

As we breathe in the shadows of time

With no limitations of past, present or future

 

Release your voice to the night

Let it sail to the stars

With the syllables

Of the one you love echoing with tenderness

Dominate the mystical realm

Sowing seeds of timeless wonder

Creating a story that even

The mightiest of beings will hear

Remembering an epic melody

 

Dance with me in the cosmos

Of time and eternity

Sing with me among the living stars

That glitter with  indefinable magic

As we breathe in the shadows of time

With no limitations of past, present or future

 

Let the shadowed wings of the ether

Wrap around us as we breathe in

The moment of mystical satisfaction

Inhale the scent of the universe

As we embrace the unknowing

Of time and live as one

Let the soul soar with majestic solace

As eternity envelopes

Caressing the moments of infinite need

As the expanse of time falls away

The restrictions of time dies

As God grants us our hearts desire

Of a love that will resonate forevermore

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[kewlbluetiger]

This had a lyrical feel to me, like it's waiting to be set to music with a chorus. I could almost hear it! The imagery is really vast and rich, but also is set in motion and gave me the feel like I was on some kind of cosmic ride.

There was also this daring play with positive spirituality that I really dig.

Love your writing. Keep it up!

[Sweets]

I loved this piece! and it has such a beautiful flow!
Took my imagination away :)
I'll read it over and over again! :D
Great work!

[Enigma]

Breath-taking and simply brilliant. You took the essence of love and placed it in the middle of the cosmos and built around it an enchanting galaxy of thoughts, idealizing the love that is shared by two people. I loved it! :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Ohhh the sensual side of soulmates... very stunning work.

[KAREN]

Beautiful, took me to another time and place.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This reminds me of a romantic fairy tale! Love the description, and the phrasing of of words were awesome!

[Ladysue]

this is utterly gorgeous writing and gorgeous ideas...the flow perfect with a great tone....very romantic and beautiful..

[Crowley]

I like that kind of dancing. This reminds me of Christmas for some reason...lol. Not sure why. Romantic to the Nth degree....I love romance. Great work.

[Audrey Howitt]

Just gorgeous writing. Loved the piece. I agree that the font is difficult to read, although it would be easier to read if the color was a bit darker--still, a timelessly romantic poem! Loved it!

[Larry Dyson]

enthralling look into attachment and romance when both parties are equal in their reverence of the Love they are building together...