Resonate Forevermore

Resonate Forevermore

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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This is how love should be. A complicated romantic thought.

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Glide along the planets

With me as they align

Our beings into one unit

Raise your hands and shine

As we produce our own ballet

Creating a moment

Where time isn’t relevant

Letting the clock freeze

And the ticking dissipate

 

Dance with me in the cosmos

Of time and eternity

Sing with me among the living stars

That glitter with indefinable magic

As we breathe in the shadows of time

With no limitations of past, present or future

 

Release your voice to the night

Let it sail to the stars

With the syllables

Of the one you love echoing with tenderness

Dominate the mystical realm

Sowing seeds of timeless wonder

Creating a story that even

The mightiest of beings will hear

Remembering an epic melody

 

Dance with me in the cosmos

Of time and eternity

Sing with me among the living stars

That glitter with  indefinable magic

As we breathe in the shadows of time

With no limitations of past, present or future

 

Let the shadowed wings of the ether

Wrap around us as we breathe in

The moment of mystical satisfaction

Inhale the scent of the universe

As we embrace the unknowing

Of time and live as one

Let the soul soar with majestic solace

As eternity envelopes

Caressing the moments of infinite need

As the expanse of time falls away

The restrictions of time dies

As God grants us our hearts desire

Of a love that will resonate forevermore

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2011 Poetic Beauty


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This had a lyrical feel to me, like it's waiting to be set to music with a chorus. I could almost hear it! The imagery is really vast and rich, but also is set in motion and gave me the feel like I was on some kind of cosmic ride.

There was also this daring play with positive spirituality that I really dig.

Love your writing. Keep it up!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Absolutely breathtaking! I found myself daydreaming of the one I love...and wistful for the ethreal quality of this love. I often don't repeat a line in a comment, but I can't help it with this one: "Let the shadowed wings of the ether..." Very mystical and poignant...one of my favorites from you!


Posted 13 Years Ago


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reread...much better colour..still superb

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Your work shimmers hon! You use such depth of ethereal tone, it seems to me....a dance amidst the clouds...sublime tones!
Beautiful work love
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Wow this is beautiful. It is definitely what love should be. You have an amazing talent. I just love this so much. Congratulations!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This had a lyrical feel to me, like it's waiting to be set to music with a chorus. I could almost hear it! The imagery is really vast and rich, but also is set in motion and gave me the feel like I was on some kind of cosmic ride.

There was also this daring play with positive spirituality that I really dig.

Love your writing. Keep it up!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Let the shadowed wings of the ether wrap around us as we breathe in the moment of mystical satisfaction.........absolutely lovely!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What an incredible write. I felt as I was floating in the universe where time had stopped for a brief moment...... to a beautiful place in my mind.... This is a wonderful poem..... I am still dreaming amoungst the stars.....; )

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Beautiful write. Your descriptions are very enjoyable and took my thoughts to another place in time.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Perfect...the best is no limits :) xx I want it and I want it now lol... ;) xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Love the font and the write was fantastic!
Nicely done Kristina...and you're right this
is how love should be, sadly you'd be lucky
if you really could have it like this...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

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