Resonate Forevermore

This is how love should be. A complicated romantic thought.

Glide along the planets

With me as they align

Our beings into one unit

Raise your hands and shine

As we produce our own ballet

Creating a moment

Where time isn’t relevant

Letting the clock freeze

And the ticking dissipate

 

Dance with me in the cosmos

Of time and eternity

Sing with me among the living stars

That glitter with indefinable magic

As we breathe in the shadows of time

With no limitations of past, present or future

 

Release your voice to the night

Let it sail to the stars

With the syllables

Of the one you love echoing with tenderness

Dominate the mystical realm

Sowing seeds of timeless wonder

Creating a story that even

The mightiest of beings will hear

Remembering an epic melody

 

Dance with me in the cosmos

Of time and eternity

Sing with me among the living stars

That glitter with  indefinable magic

As we breathe in the shadows of time

With no limitations of past, present or future

 

Let the shadowed wings of the ether

Wrap around us as we breathe in

The moment of mystical satisfaction

Inhale the scent of the universe

As we embrace the unknowing

Of time and live as one

Let the soul soar with majestic solace

As eternity envelopes

Caressing the moments of infinite need

As the expanse of time falls away

The restrictions of time dies

As God grants us our hearts desire

Of a love that will resonate forevermore

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[kewlbluetiger]

This had a lyrical feel to me, like it's waiting to be set to music with a chorus. I could almost hear it! The imagery is really vast and rich, but also is set in motion and gave me the feel like I was on some kind of cosmic ride.

There was also this daring play with positive spirituality that I really dig.

Love your writing. Keep it up!

[Winslow Des Totes]

Sweet and very mellow. I like the flow and the way the syntax feels like a rhythm, nice work!

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. It feels like it has been ages since I penned this piece.

[Winslow Des Totes]

I know the feeling :)

[The Analog Kid]

Beautifully expressed. Why can't love resonate forever...

[Jeremy Baker]

I love the optimism, the idealism and the hope that are so tied up in this write - great ideas!

[Silent Lover]

Freeing. Breathtaking. Alluring. Colorful. Expanding.

I realy like what I have been reading of you work thus far. Bravo.

[Tina Kline]

This is really impressive writing. This is how love should feel, like the whole universe is at hand and there is no limits what so ever. A very romantic and beautiful poem.

[Thea]

That was really great... :)))

[Poeticpiers]

amen If only it were always so

[roarke]

amazing what we can imagine from this mortal earthly plane eh? Passion and love are keys to the universe, both without and within. Lovely thoughts.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Though the font was a bit troublesome for me to read, I managed to read this admirably imaginative piece. Beautifully romantic. Wonderfully written! Almost lyrical.

Great write!

[Katie Lynn]

This was so very beautiful, it left me speechless and longing to be in the arms of my special someone yet again. It really gets your mind working, but in a very positive way. Great job and keep writing! :)