The Dance of Loki

for creative poetry

Loki dances with mischief

Soaring through the cosmos

With puerile antics

Sprinkling shenanigans 

across the midnight sky

Solar powered pranks

Twinkle like stars

In the purple milky way

Gleaming with trifling delight

Nirvana's pub over crowded

with drunkards intoxicated

on levity

As Loki dances with glee

Dusting a bit of trouble on the floor

And showering patrons with tomfoolery 

As Jack throws a dart

Hitting brickyard Joe in the a*s

Let the beatific pummeling begin

As Loki's laughter echoes

For no one to hear

Desseninating the calm atmosphere  

Author's Note

artwork found on google via deviantart.com

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Loki dances with mischief across the midnight sky. Solar powered pranks gleaming with trifling delight. Nirvana's pub overcrowded, yet Loki dances with glee. Dusting a bit of trouble on the floor hitting Joe in the a*s. Let the beatific pummeling begin es, disseminating the calm............he he, love it!

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ahh..the wonderful Loki makes an appearance and I am sure he would love this!

[MS. BABy]

Solar powered pranks
Twinkle like stars
In the purple milky way
Gleaming with trifling delight

I loved this line....
awesome visuals......

[kewlbluetiger]

Ha! Really flashy use of your great vocabulary added to the playfulness of your wordplay here! Love your style always.

[KAREN]

I love the way you used the words and the imagery that goes along with this poem makes the words come alive for the reader.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Sounds like a fun dance, maybe I need to let loose and dance with Mr. Loki! A fun read filled with excellent imagery!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sounds like he/she is just trying to have a little fun... a nice lighthearted and playful poem to bring a smile to the face.

[ImagineItAll]

I am going to have to visit the website because this poem was so great and fun.

[Lily Mae]

Loki hangs with my pixies sometimes and omg people never know what hit them :) xx I love it:) xx

[Jeremy Baker]

Playful with some edginess, which makes this a very enjoyable read! Very creative use of the words; you take the reader on an unexpected journey. Top write!