The Dance of Loki

for creative poetry

Loki dances with mischief

Soaring through the cosmos

With puerile antics

Sprinkling shenanigans 

across the midnight sky

Solar powered pranks

Twinkle like stars

In the purple milky way

Gleaming with trifling delight

Nirvana's pub over crowded

with drunkards intoxicated

on levity

As Loki dances with glee

Dusting a bit of trouble on the floor

And showering patrons with tomfoolery 

As Jack throws a dart

Hitting brickyard Joe in the a*s

Let the beatific pummeling begin

As Loki's laughter echoes

For no one to hear

Desseninating the calm atmosphere  

Author's Note

artwork found on google via deviantart.com

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Loki dances with mischief across the midnight sky. Solar powered pranks gleaming with trifling delight. Nirvana's pub overcrowded, yet Loki dances with glee. Dusting a bit of trouble on the floor hitting Joe in the a*s. Let the beatific pummeling begin es, disseminating the calm............he he, love it!

[Liza]

sensual delight - smooth and subtle intensity - a wave of contrasts that are vivid

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the character Loki. He is the Coyote of the Native American belief. Trying to test life and create laughter. I like the story in your poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Teri B]

Playful!

[J Todd Underhill]

Loved the read, this caught my eye because of the title. I have a brother who writes under the name of Loki Green Z, and that is what turned my attention toward it but the write was enough to keep my attention and make me want to comment.

[Mauricio Montoya]

great style-and flow, well done.

[hopelessromantic]

it was good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Dove]

This was so fun to read, im so glad you shared this with everyone.

[Tina Kline]

A very visual and playful story in your poem and it was very fun to read.

[Fenner]

I want to go to Nirvana's pub, sounds like it'd be a pretty sweet night! :)

[Enigma]

Wow. I recall the ordeal I faced while contructing a poem with the very same words and look here, you've made it appear so simple and brilliant. Excellent use of imagery and brilliantly penned. :)