Hypnos' Lullaby

creative poetry, free flow

Oh, sing to me a lullaby

Hypnos, god of dreams

Lull me to sleep

With your hypnotic ways

 

Give me whimsical scenes

That dance upon the night

Shower me with stars

And moonbeam’s silver light

 

Sprinkle me with slumber

That plays a forgotten tune

Envelope me with wonder

As romance begins to sway

 

Call out my name

Making eyes grow heavy

Soar across the sky

Singing your enchanting lullaby

Reviews

[G. Marie"floating on an..]

Ahhhhhhhh! This poem is like a breath of spring air. I loved it. So beautiful. I am saving this to my library. Your poetry amazes me. You have greatly improved your poetry since the beginning and have become very skilled at this....... I admire your progress keep writing You are a star.........

[Ladysue]

this was very lyrical and so poetic..love the lightness of this piece..beautiful and flowing..your writing is growing in leaps and bounds..love it..

[Robin]

this has such a wonderful flow , love it !

[~Juliette~]

The beauty of this poem was incredible. The flow of each stanza was magnificant and really turned out well.

[Poeticadia]

A wonderful classical feel to this and a beautiful sense of calm in the imagery. I particularly like "sprinkle me with slumber"... like a magic moon dust that helps you drift into a peaceful sleep.

[Allen Smuckler]

Very candid and beautifully penned...
It has such a peaceful air to it and dreamlike quality...
I really was enraptured by your language and your voice
allen

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love the classic's anyway ..so you were on to a winner for me..it's lovely

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Simply magical! I love sprinkle me with slumber..........

[Marie Harrison]

Lovely!
It's perfect
What a delightful read

[Chris]

I like the inherent softnesses...
it floats.

Chris