Medusa's Chattel

Medusa's Chattel

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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a little mythological a bit dark

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Enslaved vocabulary has astounding actions
Syllables slung in the faces with acidic actions
Penetrating the lungs with destructive miasmic fumes
Boating allegiance to Medusa's bewitching charms

Capitulation screaming with toxic admission
Docile demeanor proudly spoken with cocky vigor
Tongue recites a dedication to bondage with bravado
Proudly parading combustion of total ensnarement 
Loathing those who would chastise conceited vocalization

Chattel's silken binds neglected with utter dispassion
As exuberance echoes across the abundant land
While Medusa slumbers contently without acknowledgement
Leaving the tattered silk to neglectfully unravel

A mirage of submission dries the vibrant oasis
Calling to the harbinger of destruction on the pale stallion
Shadowed phantasm becomes translucently clear
As the impertinent serpent slithers to another's embrace
 

© 2011 Poetic Beauty


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Enslaved vocabulary has astounding actions. Docile demeanor proudly spoken with cocky vigor while Medusa slumbers contently without acknowledgement. Syllables are slung in the faces with acidic actions I am thinking that this well penned piece is about the power of words..............well written!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I loved that line:Enslaved vocabulary has astounding actions. then referring words to that of medusa's poision...wow...awesome

Posted 13 Years Ago


There is such a power behind the words...you give them life and more.. Another excellent write.. You are on fire.. :) xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You paint a wicked and seductive image of this beautiful freakish beast! Your word play is fantastic. Well penned!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great read. This poem shows how much skill you have in crafting wonderful poems for others to really enjoy! Love the dark but rather romantic tale in this poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A crafted and well placed piece of art, though moral indifference of slated intollerance always deepens the heart of a reader, well done, good reader.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely! Well written and worded poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Capitulation screaming with toxic admission

Docile demeanor proudly spoken with cocky vigor

Tongue recites a dedication to bondage with bravado..
sounds like someone we know?

Posted 13 Years Ago


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crafty notions along with a beautiful display of crafted word collages.. I love the sing song flow and how it gives momentum to the tale being told..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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True poetry. Your word choice is fantastic. I sense a romantic tone to the piece as a whole, especially the last stanza, Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This one was a mouthful...lol. Break out the dictionary. Dark threads and a bright white underbelly. Cool poem, "a mirage of submission dries the vibrant oasis" love that line. great work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind. Secondly be kind to each .. more..

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