Mysterious Bottle

something a little lighter

A clear glass bottle seems ordinary

For appearances can be quite deluding

Truly there is something delicious inside

Mysteriously hidden, sealed with a cork

 

Suspiciously it sits on a dusty shelf

Gleaming with an emptiness of mystery

Engaging attention with pure simplicity

Shimmering for it has an inviting secret

 

There is excitement swirling like a tornado

Swaying to the beat of volcanic energy

As moonlight passion’s sweet aroma is released

Our combined scents mingle behind the blue glass.

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

I think people can be like this bottle we view them from the outside without knowing the riches they possess with in. Many beautiful experiences are probably missed because we pass judgment on things before we ever taste them. Simplistic poem with a message in the bottle. Nicely done.

[Robin]

parfum d'emerveillement

[Marie Harrison]

There is excitement swirling like a tornado
Swaying to the beat of volcanic energy
As moonlight passion’s sweet aroma is released
Our combined scents mingle behind the blue glass.

Almost wasn't ready for this poem to end. Nice!

[roy mccarthy]

def a little softer than your latest work!
great piece,leaves a lot up to the reads interpretation too!
i like that :)