Breakfast with Sam OT

this was done in simple fun for Crowley Breakfast with OT. Loosely based off Dr. Seuss book Green Eggs and ham

I do not know what are green eggs and ham

Said Sam OT that is who I am

I have not seen them on a train

Nor have I seem them on a plane

I have not tasted them on my tongue

Their color makes me want to run

They look like mildewed eggs

Causing shakes to begin in my legs

Can i please have toast with tea

Was his simple inquiring plea

We do not serve plain toast

Only with green eggs, was her boast

We don't serve tea unless with ham

Now eat your dish or scram.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice re-write on a old story. I like how you told the tale. The movement of words made the poem fun to read. Never eat anything that is green that is a food. Except for a few vegetables. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tina Kline]

A fun version of the original. I think you did a wonderful job on this. I really enjoyed reading this poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very funny nd light hearted... a great response to the classic poem.

[The Analog Kid]

It's like a little Sam I am Suess with Green Eggs and Ham. Very cute!

[Sweets]

Nice rhythm :)
This poem has a sweet tone!
Great work!

[Ruth]

It has a really good flow to it...told as a tale, nostalgic, almost, love this! xx

[Jeremy Baker]

Fun! Great writing, and great to read as well!

[KAREN]

Fun to read! Love the new take on Dr. Suess.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great humorous poem, I've actally cooked green eggs for my class! Some ate it and some wanted to scram!

[roy mccarthy]

i like it!
sounds like good food to me!