Fateful Revelation

Revelation can burst

With an infernos flame

Unearthly revealing

A mysterious truth

Unraveling the web

Of a secret message

Illuminating what was

Once shrouded in the ether

 

With a tranquil quiet mind

The calamity clears

A silver metallic

Realization shines

As pretentious knowledge

Is discarded in the wind

Allowing symphonic

Clarity to vibrate

 

The blackened disarray

Is now clearly transparent

Giving the solid mind

Sparkling crystal perception

 But sometimes majestic

Revelation comes too late

As Fate weaves its

Intricate strangling web

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The more I study the revelation and what is real or lies. The less I know. Madness controlled the world. Blackness and disarray is in charge. Last line is a true statement.
"Revelation comes too late
As Fate weaves its
Intricate strangling web"
I enjoyed this poem. Open the doors to a thousand questions. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dream Weaver]

A truly philosophical piece worded
very well Kristina, Beautifully sculpted
into a insightful message....

[Jeremy Baker]

A teriffic poem! The words flow effortlessly and the message within them is superb. Great job!

[Grace Catherine C.]

I like it, I know the feeling too.

[Ladysue]

this is an excellent write!!!! truly very good...love that last verse especially...superb writing and images..

[roy mccarthy]

super write!

[Lily Mae]

"But sometimes majestic
Revelation comes too late
As Fate weaves its
Intricate strangling web"
Perfect.. an excellent read..xx

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Clarity rings in and all is clear until Fate steps in to weave her complexity into the picture until the solution has been strangled in her web. Excellent!

[HappyTaylor]

:) This is really good.