Fantasy Nothing More

The sun glitters on the horizon
Signaling the end to another day
Bowing goodnight in a pink display

Violet hues mingle in the sky
As white orbs twinkle from above
Mother nature now showing her love

A warm breeze blows across the earth
Soothing the tired weary mind
Making this world feel sweetly divine

Mystery drifts upon the wind
Magic created in the starry dark
A splendid emotion starts to spark

Sweet visions of passion float in
Two bodies deliciously unite
In a glorious soaring flight

Thoughts of sensual moments begin
But this is fantasy nothing more
With the heart still rocked to its core

Reviews

[Crowley]

Ahhhhhh.... floating on this one after being buried beneath the the last. You know how I love the use of colors and the colors add so much depth to this one. Romantic and light, sweet and delightful....good poem to read just before going to sleep. Loved it.....

[Seshat Nidaba]

I enjoyed the symmetry of this write, it felt very edited and pristine. Very polished and elegant. You are able to take the most cliche metaphors and make them audiable in a way that is not only not offensive, but truly quite fine.

[Art Sun]

nice work...creative...sensual...expressive vies of nature...

[SpokenWord]

I know this was sensual and about love and sensual love but the beginning made me think of the time when the earth, the heavens and the ocean were all mysteries to men and women. When we could gaze up at the stars and think they were rotating around us, when there was room for discovery unlike now. Yes a very sensual and loving write full of the mystic of the night and nature. :) Nice write

[roy mccarthy]

beautiful write!