Fantasy Nothing More

The sun glitters on the horizon
Signaling the end to another day
Bowing goodnight in a pink display

Violet hues mingle in the sky
As white orbs twinkle from above
Mother nature now showing her love

A warm breeze blows across the earth
Soothing the tired weary mind
Making this world feel sweetly divine

Mystery drifts upon the wind
Magic created in the starry dark
A splendid emotion starts to spark

Sweet visions of passion float in
Two bodies deliciously unite
In a glorious soaring flight

Thoughts of sensual moments begin
But this is fantasy nothing more
With the heart still rocked to its core

Reviews

[Crowley]

Ahhhhhh.... floating on this one after being buried beneath the the last. You know how I love the use of colors and the colors add so much depth to this one. Romantic and light, sweet and delightful....good poem to read just before going to sleep. Loved it.....

[Ruth]

And so much dreamt of and in the grasp.....but the heart.....now that is something that makes us a slave and makes us listen! Beautiful piece xx

[solo2be]

Beautiful poem, very well written

[Jibey]

A beautiful series of reflections with a sad ending... a dream that is not realised....

[emmajoy]

Here you move in the all around, it stirs and thrills you, delights and excites you, its colours are highlights, your thoughts pierce you, nothing could be more than more .. and then, hovering you're ready .. only to find that you've reached as far as you can be: ' 'Thoughts of sensual moments begin ~ But this is fantasy nothing more ~ With the heart still rocked to its core '

Your writing touches places that .. never forget.

[tigerclaw]

The fantasy is beautiful to see...I love hwne I can escape for an instance and forget all the crap that plagued me...this was an escape eventhough the reality lives in the last line..nicely done.

[Robin]

fantastic use of color and movement to stir the senses

[Kaylor Mason]

This is beautiful--the way you compared the eroticism of romance and sex with the environment and general overall beauty of nightfall is really subtle and clever. Sometimes it can be hard to do it well enough so the reader doesn't notice the shift, but you did it well here. Sweet. I especially like how the poem was ended on an ambiguous, bittersweet note: "fantasy, nothing more--heart still rocked to its core." Nice!

[Liza]

a poem that triggers the beauty and feeling of all the loving senses....emotional and romantic piece

[*]

Sensual yes, but also a little sad. "But this is fantasy nothing more" A fantasy is fun but it's always missing someone who isn't really there. Good poem.