This is chilling writing... 'onyx nights', 'frozen lies', 'eternity cold' and the words are gripped in bleak images of sores and cracked hardness... Sad but intensely powerful. You created a gith and well managed structure for the writing, with effective use of rhyme. This kind needs a lot of love!
Oh my, such dark, desperate lines .. a picture of black never ending sadness. Powerful but unyielding as if drowning in feelings you don't want to release, can't release.
As always created with skill and personal revelation into what makes you tick.
This is chilling writing... 'onyx nights', 'frozen lies', 'eternity cold' and the words are gripped in bleak images of sores and cracked hardness... Sad but intensely powerful. You created a gith and well managed structure for the writing, with effective use of rhyme. This kind needs a lot of love!
A powerful poem. The emotion of loneliness and sadness are strong in your words. Each line with a purpose leading to a very sad ending. A outstanding poem. A lot of emotion and pain in the words.
Coyote
First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind.
Secondly be kind to each .. more..