I Love You Somewhere

The just came to me and it is fitting right now

Hidden beneath the nocturnal realm

Soaring within illusions and dreams

Floating upon midnight moonbeams

 

Sailing across the purple night sky

Whispers call out to their masters

With rapture as the spell casters

 

Bouncing between lucid dreams and thoughts

With an intimate emotional care

I love you passionately somewhere

 

Entangling deep within the soul

Wisps of magical desires do flair

Secret  splendor is sent with care

 

Woven in an enthralling dream

Twinkling with silver delight

As this feeling soars to new heights

 

Bouncing between lucid dreams and thoughts

With an intimate emotional care

I love you passionately somewhere

 

 

Night vanishes with the morning sun

Daydreams created during the day

Vividly come out to frolic and play

 

Imagination comes to life

Pictures are vivid with fiery spice

Melting away enveloping ice

 

Bouncing between lucid dreams and thoughts

With an intimate emotional care

I love you passionately somewhere

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

I love this, your words and descriptions here are very beautiful. I didn't have any trouble with how often you used the word lucid. Your poem has a very mysterious and surreal feel to it, just like a dream. Excellent poem, very beautiful. I'll say it again, I love this!

[Ice QueenJen]

great poem poetic, its kind of how I feel right now about someone dear to my soul!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Somewhere in all of these dreams and beauty is the passionate love I have for you..............you have weaved this one quite beautifully!

[Brad Nugent]

Wow! This is really nice. Just came to you? I am jealous! The words flow and meld magnificently. There is a great rhythm and the repetition works well. Great work!

[Sweets]

This is wonderful!
I love how you used some rhymes in the first few lines!
and how you repeated some stuff over and over again :)
Nicely done!

[Sri Gawn Tu Fahr]

woo-hoo sweet Kristina
I love the scintillating, playful lyrics.
I feel like a feather and then like a butterfly, floating and flitting..
Vivid and lively imagery.
Awesome poem

[Desert Dreamer]

Your poem is like a dream of love...I love lucid dreams and I liked this feeling of lightness in your poem, I felt as if I were flying.

[KAREN]

Beautiful words thats filled with love and emotions! Beautiful imagery!

[Shalini Dinesh]

I love the final stanza, especially the final line... the descriptions are so beautiful and overall this poem is a pleasure to read :)

[Hello, Goodbye]

the descriptive imagery allows the feeling and emotions to shine splendidly.. the curious imagery is captivating.