Nature's Beat

Longing for spring and the green scenery

Let melodic visions fill my dreams

With peace calling in harmony

And notes flowing like bubbling streams

 

Where the sunshine is warm on my face

With its golden glow spilling down

Encompassing me with nature’s grace

 

Baby blues skies speckled with white clouds

Slowly floating on the balmy winds

Where  distractions aren’t allowed

 

Green leaves gently sway on the breeze

Dancing in the afternoon glow

To the eyes this calm sight does please

 

Soft velvety grass beneath the feet

Tickling between barefoot toes

We are grooving to nature’s beat

 

Reviews

[E.H. Monroe]

This was the calm I needed today. Just a flow of masterful nature, barefooted, letting me know its gonna be ok.
"Golden glow" and "between barefoot" are nicely spaced out but still add to the alliterative push.
Sweeetttt work, Ms. Slayers

[OT]

very nice imagery in this one!! you have a great consistent use of the ABA scheme which you work very well with!! great poem!

[Dream Weaver]

A beautiful description of some place I want to be right now...
Lovely imagery Kristina and well written...

[Linear]

It's all been said, a beautiful serenity a peaceful place to rest awhile from the torments of our hectic lives. wonderful

[Poeticadia]

Tranquillity in poetry! Yes, this would be a very lovely dream to have... and all those colours too!

[just rose.]

It will be so nice when we have returned to this! Well described!

[luciddreamer]

This was so good....the imagery was fantastic....thanks for sending it to me :)

Peace
Robin

[Ladysue]

This gave a calm peaceful feeling...something I need right now...a beautiful write with lovely images...

[DBURKE]

You painted a beautiful picture of nature's best! Great poem, well thought out and very well written =)

[Marie Harrison]

What a groovy journey you took us on. Beautiful imagery. Thanks for the lift!