Persistent Frogs

This is actually and inside joke but it makes for a funny write either way. "never put your faith in Charming he always turns back into a frog."

Visions of frogs enamor my head
Encasing vivid surreal dreams
Leaping with dominance in my bed

Always bounding through my thoughts
Croaking to gain my attention
Closure never gained only sought
 
Louder they sing within my brain
Driving me crazy with the noise
Creating feelings of complete disdain

Persistent with needing regard
Why must they constantly pester me?
Unfortunately dreams can't be barred

Swimming about my boring life
Stealing away my tranquility
Fueling emotions of hurt and strife

Green slimy suckers won't go away
Pillaging slumber and alertness
Causing laughter and disarray

Author's Note

You can laugh at this all you want. It is suppose to be funny and sarcastic

Reviews

[E.H. Monroe]

Makes me think of nagging doubts that happens to have a raspy quality. Like the constant feeling of doubt or dread that you effectively laught at. A feeling of almost a second voice trying to pester you but you have moved beyond it. An ex or some subconsious terrorist.

Deep in thought definitely

[Robin]

riveting ~ (sorry , it was there)

[LonelySoul]

did you have frog-leggs on your pizza that night?

[Frantzuu]

very fun to read, I also agree with the comment bellow me, there's a lot of truth in the poem. Awesome write!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

BUT IT HAS ALOT OF TRUTH IN IT TO ME!

[InkSlinger]

Actually very charming.. I enjoyed your twist on words and sarcasm..
But, I think Coyote said it best.. We think we have a princess or a prince, but end up with a toad.. Enjoyed this..

[luciddreamer]

Fun read....love it..
Peace
Robin

[Coyote Poetry]

Frogs need love too. Life like to twist- us up. We think we have a princess or prince. End up being a toad. I like your version better. Made me smile this morning. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Wondering Mind]

LOL..Thank goodness I'm NOT Charming...