Persistent Frogs

This is actually and inside joke but it makes for a funny write either way. "never put your faith in Charming he always turns back into a frog."

Visions of frogs enamor my head
Encasing vivid surreal dreams
Leaping with dominance in my bed

Always bounding through my thoughts
Croaking to gain my attention
Closure never gained only sought
 
Louder they sing within my brain
Driving me crazy with the noise
Creating feelings of complete disdain

Persistent with needing regard
Why must they constantly pester me?
Unfortunately dreams can't be barred

Swimming about my boring life
Stealing away my tranquility
Fueling emotions of hurt and strife

Green slimy suckers won't go away
Pillaging slumber and alertness
Causing laughter and disarray

Author's Note

You can laugh at this all you want. It is suppose to be funny and sarcastic

Reviews

[E.H. Monroe]

Makes me think of nagging doubts that happens to have a raspy quality. Like the constant feeling of doubt or dread that you effectively laught at. A feeling of almost a second voice trying to pester you but you have moved beyond it. An ex or some subconsious terrorist.

Deep in thought definitely

Agreed Ink~
humorous and tragic!
I feel this writing well~

[Inkcognito]

Ribbit, rubbit...I have kissed several princes who turned out to be toads...I really don't mind the odd frog...as long as it's not a warty bull(shht)frog... those seem to be an invasive species these days, so... if you find one in your bed...make sure to throw it out into the nearest slimy pond!
A bitter-sweet, smile inducing, fun read, indeed!

[The Warrior Poet]

My G-Rated substitution for the F-word just happens to be "FROGS!", on the occasion that I am able to censor myself. ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Watch out they may give you warts... that was quiet a fun tongue in cheek look at the dating scene. Very enjoyable.

[sarah]

this is very funny! good job

[Mauricio Montoya]

not in my bed Thank you. lol

[The Analog Kid]

They're so benign, they could drive you nuts... Then there's frogs and princes. Cute and funny write. ....croak!

[ice]

It is humorous, and also tragic, at the same time, like the two masks of theatre.
"Visions of frogs enamor my head" -comedy
"Creating feelings of complete disdain"-tragedy
"Green slimy suckers won't go away"-comedy
"Fueling emotions of hurt and strife"-tragedy

That's my take on it anyway...
Nameste
ice

[Cafe Reader]

Enjoyable! A fun read!

[Bette]

:) freakin frogs.