Persistent Frogs

This is actually and inside joke but it makes for a funny write either way. "never put your faith in Charming he always turns back into a frog."

Visions of frogs enamor my head
Encasing vivid surreal dreams
Leaping with dominance in my bed

Always bounding through my thoughts
Croaking to gain my attention
Closure never gained only sought
 
Louder they sing within my brain
Driving me crazy with the noise
Creating feelings of complete disdain

Persistent with needing regard
Why must they constantly pester me?
Unfortunately dreams can't be barred

Swimming about my boring life
Stealing away my tranquility
Fueling emotions of hurt and strife

Green slimy suckers won't go away
Pillaging slumber and alertness
Causing laughter and disarray

Author's Note

You can laugh at this all you want. It is suppose to be funny and sarcastic

Reviews

[E.H. Monroe]

Makes me think of nagging doubts that happens to have a raspy quality. Like the constant feeling of doubt or dread that you effectively laught at. A feeling of almost a second voice trying to pester you but you have moved beyond it. An ex or some subconsious terrorist.

Deep in thought definitely

[ChristianM]

Funny poem Kristina.
Love the profile pic. Kermit the Frog is a big inspiration of my writing, or rather Jim Henson is.

[Ladysue]

LOL...this was good and made me laugh indeed! loved it!

[Fran Marie]

lmao... am lovin' it ....persistent pestering frogs who need 'em anyhow

you must read my 'Frog Poo' poem i wrote a couple years back

I will send it to you...

Great WritE!!

[emmajoy]

Laughing at this one, makes a change to share laughs instead of miserable this and that! Oh those frogs, they make so much noise, always wanting to grab the stage ..

Naughty last three lines but oh, how appropriate: 'Green slimy suckers won't go away ~ Pillaging slumber and alertness ~ Causing laughter and disarray '

[Crowley]

Damn frogs....don't lick em, you might have even more fun...lol. Fun and light and written with a tongue in cheek style that I loved. Nice job.

[Another Relic]

Quite a humorous poem. I used to be a frog in high school, I did a lot of croaking I think but I never jumped on their beds much though. Don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing. LOL Anyway, I learned my lesson from it. Or, at least I think I have. Haha, good poem with some nice phrases throughout.

[Sean M. Addams]

very funny and cute piece liked it alot

[SpokenWord]

This one was funny actually and you hit your mark. Croaking to gain your attention that part made me laugh because I can see guys doing that, hell, I have done it. I like the connection you made with humor frogs and men, what a combination and green letters to boot!!

[Terry Collett]

yeah I like this. Good poem.