Dear Ice Princess

this is a poem in a letter format

Dear Ice Princess,
 I seriously care not what you think
I learned along time ago to say what you feel
To be honest with you, my anger is on the brink
Of hitting you severely in the a*s with my heel

Oh, I understand your message and concern
But I'm not the treacherous lying one here
There are many hidden things you need to learn
But frankly, teaching you isn't my place, dear

My message is purposely vague and confusing you
But reality check, your feelings mean nothing to me
Irritation is the feeling starting to brew
You're blind, open your eyes, and truly begin to see

I'm not the one crossing lines with leaps and bounds
But you wouldn't believe the tale even if I told you
For it would rock your foundation, the truth confounds
For in a million years on this you wouldn't have a clue

So to conclude go away, leave me alone
I'll keep my stupid promise, boundaries will be kept
Just know true patience with you has been silently shown
For reality and the truth you'd never see or accept

Sincerely,

The one whom you feel threatened by

Author's Note

any idea and thoughts are welcomed. be honest I can take it.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Seems there is more than one justified complainant in the Cafe!

Love the style in which you've written this and the gentle power of your words, they make a point in the most literary of styles. You more or less defend and attack at the same time, clearly and pretty smoothly.

[just rose.]

Letter-poems are the absolute best, you can take your subject and speak to them so precisely. I like how you've managed the emotion so carefully here, but the point is not missed. Well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like it. Direct and to the point. Hard but polite. Sometime need to face the problem to show there is none. A excellent letter.
Coyote

[Crowley]

Man...very identifiable emotions here and the writing was good. The epitome of frustration and the need to constantly ask the question why. I think you have tapped into a vein....nice work.

[Dream Weaver]

I really like the way you did this Kristina,
I would just add a signature to the bottom
of it. IMO that would make it feel authentic.
But very nicely done :)

[luciddreamer]

Wow, I can so relate to this writing, and you know I have come to the same conclusion, they can't take the truth...hell sometimes neither can I....fantastic work :)
Peace
Robin