Dear Ice Princess

this is a poem in a letter format

Dear Ice Princess,
 I seriously care not what you think
I learned along time ago to say what you feel
To be honest with you, my anger is on the brink
Of hitting you severely in the a*s with my heel

Oh, I understand your message and concern
But I'm not the treacherous lying one here
There are many hidden things you need to learn
But frankly, teaching you isn't my place, dear

My message is purposely vague and confusing you
But reality check, your feelings mean nothing to me
Irritation is the feeling starting to brew
You're blind, open your eyes, and truly begin to see

I'm not the one crossing lines with leaps and bounds
But you wouldn't believe the tale even if I told you
For it would rock your foundation, the truth confounds
For in a million years on this you wouldn't have a clue

So to conclude go away, leave me alone
I'll keep my stupid promise, boundaries will be kept
Just know true patience with you has been silently shown
For reality and the truth you'd never see or accept

Sincerely,

The one whom you feel threatened by

Author's Note

any idea and thoughts are welcomed. be honest I can take it.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Seems there is more than one justified complainant in the Cafe!

Love the style in which you've written this and the gentle power of your words, they make a point in the most literary of styles. You more or less defend and attack at the same time, clearly and pretty smoothly.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

IT CUT RIGHT TO THE CHASE! I TOO LIKED THE LETTER IDEA!!!

[The Analog Kid]

The first stanza did make me laugh. I bet it felt good to write. You may never send it, but it served it's purpose nonetheless. I like the letter format.

[Bette]

geter girl

[LonelySoul]

Frosty,Cutting,Quick to Bite and Cold to the bone...considering the time of year,(November)I do find it strange that I like this read...lol
Thanx for sharing with us...LonelySoul

[Cheryl J. Turner]

I felt a little threatened and uncomfortable by this piece, like I had stumbled upon a private feud..

[O Bubbly_snowflake *]

You've made me want to try by own letter piece!

[Ruth]

This is amazing hon! A great piece of unique work :)
Honest, passionate, cathartic too I hope lol
Brilliantly voiced, one of my fav's!
xx

[Cafe Reader]

Great expressions!

[TAO]

I have no ideas. This sharp, like an authentic Odachi, full tang, folded steel bliss with an edge that makes the sky cringe. Potent, Ms.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

To be honest with you, my anger is on the brink
Of hitting you severely in the a*s with my heel

I love those lines... you rock... say what you feel, that is what this land of free speech is for. You got spunk and heart my friend.