Hellcat on the Prowl

There's a hellcat on the prowl tonight
She's pissed off and lookin' to fight
Hell bent with fury on the rise
Hearing the scream, her only prize

A fiery anger dwelling deep within
Consuming the mind, the spreading begins
Fourteen day till the fur flies
Then out will come all the lies

Fueling fire flowing within pumping veins
Scorching flames combust reaching the brain
Betrayal feeding the rampage
Soon he shall feel the hellcat's rage

As the second hand ticks sluggishly slow
Mounting frustration and fury does grow
Razor sharp claws are protruding
Soon there will be no deluding

She should have left the hellcat alone
Now the claws are gonna cut to the bone
Lines are drawn, battle's begun
Now there's a war to be won.

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

I hate to be the guy she is at war with. In any relationship lies can cause this kind of fury. They say the truth will set you free and lies you bury you dead. Poetry is art but also it is technical maybe that is why I prefer story telling over poetry. In this one I can see the anger but I can't feel it, it is being held back maybe? I think you did great with the rhyming part and keeping it in a poetic format. After experiencing the anger of woman, I can imagine how if expressed in this poem it would be explosive.

I enjoyed this poem and noticed the words all painted in red, still I wouldn't want to be that guy when the claws come out.

[luciddreamer]

Wow...love the anger brought out in this writing...good job :)
Peace
Robin

[emmajoy]

Oh my, such power and anger .. wild for sure. You certainly painted a dangerous and bloody picture with these words .. look out ! ' Lines are drawn, battle's begun ~ Now there's a war to be won. '

[Dream Weaver]

Fiery anger unleashed and out of control..
You've captured lightning in a bottle..

[The Analog Kid]

The red font says it all. Very intense emotion. Good rhyming.

[Cheryl J. Turner]

Fierce.
A Real message in this piece.

[Nothing Personal]

I found an intense description of anger in the poem-
"A fiery anger dwelling deep within
Consuming the mind, the spreading begins
Fourteen day till the fur flies
Then out will come all the lies

Fueling fire flowing within pumping veins
Scorching flames combust reaching the brain
Betrayal feeding the rampage
Soon he shall feel the hellcat's rage"

I find your lines raging and provocative, vicious in tone and obviously the right choice of ink. Good write...

[Coyote Poetry]

Best to leave those hellcats alone. I met a few in my life. Too much anger and energy can create a wild woman. I like this poem. Great description and story in your words. I like the ending. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[StacyPerry]

Nice write....I enjoyed it.

[TAO]

...umm...grrr...much? Wow... This is intense. I honestly feel like I'm about to have my arse handed to me... And I'm trying with all my might not to ask for forgiveness...because, that would just be insane. Speaks to the effect of your poem. Well done.

[Robin]

expressed furiously , intense and incensed