Fateful Silence

only 14 more days till the silence is broken.

Impenetrable silence stretches through the days
Ticking hands on the fateful clock, sounding through the hours
Ominous quiet over casting the smile's bright rays
Shadowing clouds causing misery to down pour showers.

Threatening emotions rage within the confused mind
Storming sadness rumbles in the disparaging distance
Thundering agony surfacing and does binds
Intelligence losing control and resistance

Barricades smashing, crumbling into gritty sand
Pulsing waves overtaking tranquility and calm
Deafening silence still looming across the bleak land
Shattered heart weeping , bleeding in a cold palm

Shouting for an answer, pleading, begging for sound
Name protruding from vulnerable needful lips
Why is the heart eternally, to him, chained and bound
Memories repeat playing like slow motion movie clips.

Reviews

[StacyPerry]

Thank you for sharing this piece. On the line "Intelligence LOOSING control and resistance"...did you mean LOSING or were you speaking about LOOSENING?? I enjoyed the write, I didn't want to read the line wrong though [please do not take it as a criticism....just curious to which was you mean things and it looks a good read whichever you mean].

[The Analog Kid]

I like the way it seems distant yet so real. As if told from a 3rd person. Nice to to see "I" dometimes. Good imagery.

[Robin]

this is an emotional outpouring of a heart in pain ~ vivid and dramatic

[Wondering Mind]

this is very well written, the silence feels like a vacuum sucking at the soul.

[ClosingAccount]

Amazing good!