Love's Reasoning

As the glowing sun falls away from the horizon
And tiny orbs glitter across the velvet sky
Thoughts rapidly form, memories begin to fly

Warm sunny days spent playing outside, water fights
Smiles gleaming bright upon three content faces
Venturing off to different beautiful places

Hours of delight acting like kids being free
Enjoying each moment that delightfully past
Longing and wishing those minutes would last

As night would fall and purple invaded the sky
Little one safely tucked in a comfortable bed
Quiet time together, new directions lead

Sitting in the cool grass gazing at the stars
Talking meaningfully about whatever came to mind
Even now passionate love is utterly blind

the world vanished, melting transparently away
Two people totally emerged in their scene
Snuggling close into comforting arms she'd lean

Solace had finally been discovered and found
Walls were dissolved, broken into grains of sand
No longer treading water, feet finally found land

Letting her heart heal and soulfully connect
Forever giving it all, her heart eternally bound
No longer beating as two, but pulsing one sound

Enduring love welding her heart, always to him
With abandon, to his soul, hers merged forever to stay
Memories of those times, keep the darkness at bay

Distance and time keeping them now, utterly apart
But her love continues even during this passing time
When it doesn't make any sense, no reason no rhyme. 

 

 

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Distance and time keeping them now, utterly apart
But her love continues even during this passing time
When it doesn't make any sense, no reason no rhyme.

True love is also timeless love and no boundaries or walls can lock it away in lonely chains. Deeply intense wording flows from your verse.

[Bette]

well done pb.

[Dream Weaver]

Wow, I do miss being that young when life had that
much more zest and hope..loved it

[Inci]

very nice write.. :))

[Coyote Poetry]

Something can't be token away from us. Memories and love will be tattoos on our heart and mind. A powerful poem with a very good story. Last lines were facts. A outstanding poem. I must read your poems a few times. I like the strength in the use of the language.
Coyote

[StacyPerry]

Nice write, the last line brought it to me with everything you had as well

[Ruth]

This is lush! lol
Beautifully delivered love! The essence of love encased with movinf forward, there has to be that for life to function at times!
Great poem
xx

[Immortal1967]

Very sentimental poem, love the way it tracks the love, and how at the end, even though apart, her love remains. Great job.

[Sophia Argyris]

Reading this is like watching breif moments from an old film, seeing the images of all the happy times spent together, leading up the ending that makes the memories more poignant.

[the_stoic]

i wonder how this masterpiece has just 4 reviews :o .. what a rhyming scheme . phenomenal imagery used mam ! oh .. goes into my favorites.