Hiding Behind Walls

wrote for image born group

Since time began there have been secret societies
Each trying to rule, taking away someone's glee
the Ku Klux Klan started out this way
Destroying lives was their secret play
Hiding behind white hoods covering their faces
Hating all non-white people and races
So the writing on the wall is loud and clear
Secret societies love to induce fear
Cowards hiding behind gray walls
Yet walking plainly down public halls
Gathering in secret meeting places
Too fearful to show the world their faces.

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

First your form and style is just awesome in this one. I can never hit form like this thus why I prefer spoken words when I write.

I have to say that our world is full of these secret organizations from citizens into the government, everyone has a secret agenda of changing or controlling this world. I wonder if things continue to collapse how many of these secret organizations will be trusted into power.

A very direct intelligent poem of truth and power. Great write.

[Dream Weaver]

It has always been that way since the beginning of time. They fear what they don't understand. Then try to instill fear to make it go away. Forever hiding behind masks, aprons, religion and so on..Nicely done...

[Sean M. Addams]

i like this a rather powerful piece and you had alot great lines in this... overall I Tthought this was a great write.. awesome job on this!!

[G. Marie"floating on an..]

Wow!!! You really threw a power punch here right in the abs. of these cowards great write. I couldn't have said this better. where did that come from? some recent news of secret societies? yeah, I'm sure they still exist. just laying low.

[Crowley]

Powerful stuff...great poem for the image for sure. It is an interesting image...not quite sure what I will do with it. Great job girl.