Hiding Behind Walls

wrote for image born group

Since time began there have been secret societies
Each trying to rule, taking away someone's glee
the Ku Klux Klan started out this way
Destroying lives was their secret play
Hiding behind white hoods covering their faces
Hating all non-white people and races
So the writing on the wall is loud and clear
Secret societies love to induce fear
Cowards hiding behind gray walls
Yet walking plainly down public halls
Gathering in secret meeting places
Too fearful to show the world their faces.

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

First your form and style is just awesome in this one. I can never hit form like this thus why I prefer spoken words when I write.

I have to say that our world is full of these secret organizations from citizens into the government, everyone has a secret agenda of changing or controlling this world. I wonder if things continue to collapse how many of these secret organizations will be trusted into power.

A very direct intelligent poem of truth and power. Great write.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This poem is wonderful, you brilliantly stated true facts! Awesome!

[Eagle Cruagh]

Among others you have just written
of criminal gangs. The CIA, FBI.
Almost any organization which prohibits
free interchange of thought.
P. G & E, Pacific Gas and Electric, dictates
policy and control over energy use on
the West Coast.

I don`t believe many secret societies are
devoted to instilling fear, many simply
exercise absolute control as a way of
controlling money.

Brilliant little poem/story.

---- Eagle Cruagh

[Ruth]

Wonderful love!
True, they have existed since the beginning of time really!
New names are invented for them but they have always been here!
A great poem!
xx

[Emily B]

I have seen great hatred, it fills me with fear.

[kewlbluetiger]

Powerful write. I like how it conveys that evil hides cowardly in the midst of good. Awesome work. Keep it up!

[Dana Kathryn]

I like this one lots!! Your words are so true...yes the fools in humanity...so many are lost!Lets hope the strong and the good prevail!!! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Plain cowards they are... destroying and taking lives then hiding out... simply stated but with raw force.

[Jenny Nelson]

Cowards and many of them indeed. Well put. A great thought.

[Fran Marie]

A great take on this week's image, yes, they still exist and are in control
in more ways than one~

well penned and nicely expressed