Magical Stars

I sat staring at the brilliant orbs scattered across the sky.
Are you looking up gazing at their twinkling white light too?
My thoughts drifting to that magical night, making me sigh.

The sun's setting light is but a tiny glimmer in the west;
Bright pinks with hinting oranges dissipate in the distance,
Mind churning the precious thoughts as longing does crest.

Gazing at the stars as comfort surrounded us with love;
Talking till twilight filled the sky with hinting morning light;
Holding each other tenderly looking at the orbs above.

Do you remember this special night under the midnight sky?
Where tenderness filled the air around us pulling us together;
When laughter floated on the breeze giving us a natural high.


 

Reviews

[InkSlinger]

You are a mood setter.. you weave a great image into your feelings, capturing the essence of what your feeling while offering us a glimpse, not to much, just enough for us to wander along side of you.. with out own feelings and interpretations...
Beautiful as always..

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

BREATH TAKEING! so romantic! Great Write!

[Inkcognito]

The yarn that spins magical moments and unforgettable memories. Fabulous imagery...marvelous piece!

[Cheryl J. Turner]

This is magical.

[ice]

Thank you for suggesting I read this, it made my morning warm, before I made a fire...The snow on the ground, outside, melted a little, by doing so..
I get high on laughter , every chance I get...love the last line.
Namste
ice

[SpokenWord]

This reminds me of first love, the first time feeling the butterflies and how the whole world seems brand new and everything about it is as clear as the stars above. I like the quiet setting of the night where one can remember love in such a way as you have written.

[Ruth]

So many beautiful lines from observation, a wonderful poem!
Stars can tell us so much!
The universe is a truly beautiful place at heart!
Great work
xx

[HorrorMaster]

Very good poem

[Fran Marie]

Quite lovely in its poetic verse ~ serene and most enjoyable to
look up to the stars in the night sky~ beautifully written....

[Mauricio Montoya]

I actually saw a shooting star burst in the night sky and now I read this, awesome.