Blazing Fireworks

A poem I wrote for Poetry and Lyrical Challenge group

Blazing colors illuminate the night sky;
Thunderous booms disturb the silence.
Squawking birds begin to scatter and fly.

Vibrant hues of every beautiful shade;
Splash against the blacken velvet scene;
Silently, the show is over and begins to fade.

Smoke circles filling the stagnant cool air;
As oxygen rushes from healthy lungs
The heart descends, for he is no longer there.

Dreams how deceitfully convincing they can be;
For love once blazing with color and fire,
Has escaped, showing the past, and leaving reality.

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

All those fireworks, all that colours .. just as love can be described .. great metaphor there .. sad the ending, memories maybe not as colourful as the could be.

A lovely but sad poem, beautifully written .. 'Vibrant hues of every beautiful shade; Splash against the blacken velvet scene; Silently, the show is over and begins to fade.'

[Crowley]

I love those fireworks...hoping the grande finale is laying next and breathing heavy and not saying goodbye. This was a great write sweet, I loved it.

[Huggy Bear]

Very descriptive and powerful like fireworks:)

[Parker Pearl]

i like it. good use of metaphor.

[Steve]

Sounds so sad and devastating......

[Antonio Valentino]

I hope those bright rockets return to your heart soon dear friend.

This was a wonderful poem thanks for sharing it with us.
Antonio :)

[R E Tree]

This is very imaginative and yet you have a very creative imagination. If you were to read the poem to me without saying the title or anything of what it's about. I would be able to draw fireworks as thats what I see in my head when I read it. Every line is so true and stunning in a creative way. Fireworks especially rockets make loud bangs this line describes it beautifully "Thunderous booms disturb the silence" that good that I would like to see more of it

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Your brilliant words takes me back to every wonderful independence day I've celebrated.

[Shalini Dinesh]

the poem is so easy to read and understand and had a good flow, fireworks are colorful and so is your poem...

[Ruth]

Beautifully done love! Excellent word use too:)
Vivid with colour as well as emotion!
xx

[La3uren]

luv the imagry good job :) :)