Emerald Sea

Written for Poetry and Lyrical challenge group. The title was Emerald Sea and the topic was a tree.

Drifting away;
On an emerald sea.
Lost in tranquility.

Where the tree branches;
Glide and gently sway,
As clouds flutter away.

A peaceful time,
With glistening rays.
The sun trickles and plays.

Through the green leaves;
To my relaxed calm face.
No love to thirstily chase.

Yearning is quiet,
As the gradual breeze blows,
With a slight stillness that shows.

Mind calm at last
The oak temperately dances
As the sunset now advances

Reviews

[deeps]

This is a really beuatiful write here. I like this it's touching.

[StacyPerry]

Beautiful and moving.

[Soul Magic✯]

wow this is beautifully penned... felt the tranqility in this piece. loved the description xx

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is beautiful. Took me to the sea and the calm of the ocean. A outstanding poem. The description was very good. Thank you.
Coyote