New Day

The heavens opened up
With warm rain pouring down
Plants thirsty, drinking from this sweet cup

Night starts to fall
With gentle sounds of rain
Nature receiving it's wondrous heal all

Cloths of gray clouds
Fill the darkened mysterious sky
Occasionally thunder booms loud

Sunrise but a moment away
Bright light fills the blue morning
The orange ball saying I won't stray

The warm afternoon sun
 Only but a few feet way
Making nature glorious, as a new day has begun

Reviews

[Holly-Marie]

A wonderful poem. Beautiful imagery. I could just see the scene leaping from the page =)

[Mauricio Montoya]

I’ve been to parts of Mexico where the sun would bean through the trees and at the same time it be raining I could picture that when I
Read the first line (The heavens open up)
Nice harmonize flow which comes together beautify.

[bluessadmood]

I dreamed like i stayed out one day..
i saw heavens,i saw heavens open and me soaked with rain
and i wait to see the nights sky..earth so wet my feet sunk deep
thunder sounded loud..its like an orchestrated scene and sound
and still i wait for morning sun to fill the earth with golden blue
blue orange and yellow,bright lights shed everywhere
and i stayed..till the weakened mid day sun..came
my feet still wet how i blended with everything,i was part of everything
how i rejoiced ,and i stayed till night..all night to witness another lovely day
that was so sweet ,a full lovely cycle of a life..sweet life lived in the wild
lovely write..

[freaknkamikaze]

This is such a beautiful poem. I could just image most of it. Very good.

Keep up the great work!!!
-Lonikay

[Abhinav]

Antonio was right, me too...
fantastic poem
the new day was described wonderfully
i loved this poem!

[Antonio Valentino]

Very nice Poetic, I'll be thinking of these words tomorrow morning!

Antonio