New Light

You are my light upon waking
You are my moon at night
You are the one who holds me tight

Smiles now shine on my face
Dreary days don't seem so bad
Tearful days are now brightly glad

Days are filled with laughter
Night are filled with passion
Life beaming with sweet compassion

You are my light upon waking
You are my moon at night
You are the one who holds me tight

Life is shimmering with glee
Rapture floats freely all around
A sense of contentment now found

Star are more luminous
Sunshine intoxicatingly warm
All of the is a new realm out of the norm

You are my light upon waking
you are my moon at night
You are the one who holds me tight.

Author's Note

I know there are many yous in this poem but this poem was written for one person.

Reviews

[BlackRose]

Its beautiful, and very well written. The emotion and feeling was screaming from it. I like poems written in this form, and are straight forward. I could actually see what you were talking about. You weren't hiding the meaning behind weird riddles and twists. That poetry is good in its own way, but i like this way better. Awesome job on this piece. I love it!

[The Water Queen]

I love it. Thank you for sharing such great and wonderful pieces to the world.

--The Angel of the Earth---

[MissWordSmith]

This was nice,however I felt it was a little more on the side of ''surfacy'' ... it was like a breeze....beautiful to feel, but then when gone, didn't make you think about it any more. It was a fair try however. really.

[Frantzuu]

Great poem

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Star are more luminous
Sunshine intoxicating warm
All of the is a new realm out of the norm


oh how love can change your perception and make everything better... I found a great flow and a lot of delightful sentiment.

[The Analog Kid]

Nice idea in repeating the first stanza...helps it flow nicely. Also, I like "luminous" in here. Nice, straight forward write!

[NightsShade]

I would suggest maybe prof reading this one more time. I found that I was stumbling in a few places because of the way that things were worded. I felt that the repetition didn't take away from the piece. Just my opinion...

[Subjective Sanity]

I like the repetition of the word. I think it makes a point and re-enforces what you want to say ti this particular person. I get that and I don't think it could be said any better. Well done.

[Bette]

And i know who. well done p/b!

[HorrorMaster]

Very beautiful. :)