Simple Touch

Sensations of Love and pleasure
Are emotions I can't measure
Feeling warm and secure
An affection I yearn to endure

To have rough hands caress mine
Trembling and anticipation do combine
Supple skin does sensitize
For this reaction, there's no compromise

Rapid breathing in an out
Sensual pleasure all about
Rough grooves touch the supple
Two hands become a couple.

Author's Note

be honest. this is an older poem that I wrote in 2005.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

you have a special way to thoughts and words..
no one could measure love ,how long and how deep
i touched those hands..how strange i felt
and i trembled,its like touching a new life,and exploring
never explored before..how strange,what mixed feelings they gave
we are both so close in everything
feelings ,genes and chemistry
yet those hands felt so different,how they moved me, they touched
and brought magic..i could almost fly
whats in a touch,whats in a kiss..such magic i never saw the like before
how i could feel those textures i could spend days feeling the tingling
they gave me to no end..and i wonder again..whats in a touch
i was really moved again by those words..and i thought
lovely write..

[Soul Magic✯]

this is beautifully written. i love the romantic vibe in this piece. your flow is so amazing... i enjoyed it :)

[NightsShade]

I felt that this piece had a nice flow and the rhyme scheme was great. I'm glad to say that you're not one of these people that just rhyme to rhyme. Yours fits well together and makes sense.
Great write!

[Subjective Sanity]

I think it's sweet. I really like it.

[HorrorMaster]

I love it and yes i am honest.

[Lost, n'MT]

This was an excellently written poem and that I enjoyed reading very much. This is my favorite style of poetry to read by far and I think you expressed it very well. Great flow, enjoy the rhyme scheme, and depicted beautifully. I am bit surprised that you felt to rate this mature, I was expecting a lot more "graphic" material but I enjoyed it nonetheless. If you have any poems few several years ago, I'd definitely recommend (and look forward to) you sharing them. But thanks again for sharing such a nice piece. --Broken Soul

[Bette]

this is great, and the rhythm is sweet. once again p/b i love it.