Shadows

Shadows creep in the night
Lurking outside the door
Hiding from the daylight

Waiting to jump out
A quiet moment to strike
Wanting to cause a shout

Sun shine fills the sky
The shadows will wait
Another night they will try

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Cool, I love shadows. It has creepy and realistic settings that don't cross over into the fantastical realm. It feels like every day, normal paranoia rather than mythical stuff. Nicely done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This was a fun little read... I do see it as a hysterical look at those inner demons that haunt us.

[Lost, n'MT]

So much expressed in so so little words. Very nicely done. I can honestly say I have never thought of the perspective from shadows but I like it and feel as if my mind opened up. Amazing write here.

[Subjective Sanity]

I like this. It starts out kinda of ominous and then feels childishly devious. Great work!

[MissWordSmith]

nicceeeeee!!! this was short and sweet. you made the shadows have a mind of their own, which many of us sometimes believe, though we don't think about it much.
A very good write.! Keep up the good writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this. Remind me of a child mind. Darkness bring the ghosts and goblets out. A excellent poem. The light of day bring safety.
Coyote

[HorrorMaster]

Amazing work, I just love it.

[The Water Queen]

amazing read.:)