Love's Chance

As time ticks by
The love is still there
Making the mind sigh
And the heart care

Thoughts are drifting
To a time in the past
The spirit is lifting
Hoping the feeling will last

Smiles gleam on the face
Twinkles are in the eye
His hands to interlace
Now the minds in the sky

Dreaming of a different time
Of a love that once was
When love was at it's prime
This is what the heart simply does

Longing for that day once more
Hoping for the last chance
Is there an open door?
To give this love another dance

Reviews

[ICE]

This was a great piece! I thought that it flowed beautifully. Great work!

[Astoria Eve]

I absolutely love the line: "His hands to interlace". You transition very well between stanzas and the flow is fantastic. Great job!