Vibration of Comfort

Come lay gently upon this bed
Enjoy the comfort it offers
Let silence surround with ease
Close those weary ocean eyes
Allow this quiet space give peace

Place an exhausted body
Upon a pillowy mattress
That curves exactly where it should
Giving support in achy places
Deep slumber settles; if it would

Heavy Kaiden lid flutter
As breathing begins to slow
A rhythmic pattern starts
It floats freely to the air
A true physical form of art

Allow warmth to seep within
Feminine supple thighs pressed
Close giving heated refuge
Silken moment of solace
That offers mental refuge

Velvet energy lowly hums
Purring a restful melody
That vibrates with content
A reprieve from the world’s chaos
Quietness that is wholly sent

Reviews

[Lorry]

Well I've just found out I'm not the only person who sleeps with a pillow at the small of my back (it also comes in quite handy if I'm sleeping on my side too)
But don't think I didn't see what you done there young lady! Lulling me in with talk of pillows (which I suppose is what is called pillow talk) and then getting all growed up story talk without so much as a by or leave! I'm all of a fluster young lady and not a growed'd up in sight!
It's either that or you're playing Nintendo under the covers! 😃

[Poetic Beauty]

Well this was more about being with the person that gives you comfort and not so much the grown up pillow talk

[A.H.]

this poem has a certain warmth and reading through it feels very therapeutic. nicely written piece and flows smoothly and reads wonderfully. thanks for sharing.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you were able to feel the warmth and the soothing aspect of this poem. I think we all long for a space like this.

[Mauricio Montoya]

BP wow you woke me up, we've been around this site a long time, now this write made me think what I can't do anymore, sleep peacefully, but it did bring back memories when I could only dream. Good write.
Thank you for sharing.

[Poetic Beauty]

If nothing else my dear friend I am glad it allowed you remember what a peaceful sleep was like

[Mauricio Montoya]

Read.me as I have read

[Chris Shaw]

How splendidly relaxing your words are. Read slowly I could feel myself calming and drifting into a meditative state. A poem which takes the cares of the day away and offers comfort and solace. Soft sounding sensual language. Lovely.

Chris

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m am glad this gave you relaxation and comfort. It was definitely meant to be soothing and comforting

[Amy R]

Very passionate poem.. I enjoyed reading this one,.
The imagery illustrates a serene setting where one can escape the chaos of the outside world.

The use of sensory language (e.g., "heavy Kaiden lid flutter," "velvet energy," "purring a restful melody") enhances the immersive quality of the poem, allowing us readers to feel the sensations described.

Your poem created a very sensual yet quiet world away from the chaos we all face..
Thanks for sharing
-Amy

[Poetic Beauty]

That is exactly the whole feel and thought poured into this poem.

[Amy R]

Glad to know. Have a good day Pb!

[Lydia Shutter]

Filled with desire and anticipation of a passionate night. Nice one. Lydi**

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you anticipating what’s to come maybe but the comfort and peace a moment like that can offer is amazing

[Soren]

I have led hundreds of hours or relaxation training and this takes me back and feels like home. Very nicely stated in peaceful, calm words that pour like a fine wine and feel like velvet to the touch. There is a warmth and inviting nature to its flow and it seductively lurs the reader into its pacing and quieting space. Lovely

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you were able to feel the slightly seductive quality of this yet the overwhelming sense of comfort and relaxation

[Sami Khalil]

Hot, steamy, energetic, appealing, appeasing, rising, falling of passions in the space of bed and night time.
Rest and refuge is sought; love and laughter is caught.
When we slip under covers, love hovers.

[Poetic Beauty]

Exactly 100 percent

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Wow!
You are welcome

[Pete]

that's some well-stuffed mattress. nothing like the comfort and refuge of our beds. a good place to unwind and mull things over. good for other activities too when the feeling calls.

[Poetic Beauty]

There is a comfort to you bedroom and space within it

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful. You bring the reader into the scene. Powerful.

[Poetic Beauty]

Small amounts of contact with this person can create a huge amount of comfort

[Vol]

PB,
It has been too long, but your poem echoes in the emptiness...
Vol

[Poetic Beauty]

I wrote this after Mr Blue Eyes had come in work and I put his arm around me when he was standing behind me. He hugged me tight and then I was standing behind him, stood on my tip toes and laid my chin on his shoulder.

[Vol]

PB,
Oh, sigh, what I wouldn't give...
Vol