Decadent Antipaction

Read at your own risk risk 😂 Just for you Lorry

A delicious temptation
Laid carefully in full view
Visually pleasing to the eyes

Delicate full curves beckon
Soft lips begin to quiver
In anticipation of a taste

The mouth waters with hunger
As the sweet morsel teases
In a beautiful display

Decadent layers lay perfect
Frosted in smooth chocolate
With intricate fancy ripples

A visually pleasing sight
Of a rich bittersweet fudge
Begging to be tasted fully

Topped with crimson raspberries
Plump and ready to be plucked
Off clouds of whipped cream

Oh scrumptious black velvet cake
How I want to devour you
With ravenous abandon

Reviews

[Lorry]

Well, now for my usual guesstimate at the hidden meaning in this one!
So, if it pleases the court your honor (I heard that in a Columbo episode), let's look at the evidence the accused has willingly provided us, shall we?
You see your honour how she speaks of delicate curves and intricate fancy ripples to try throwing us off the scent, with not a single "I need a grown up" warning in sight!
Can't you see the invisible smirk on the accuseds face, as she has the audacity to sully your good court by turning up wearing that nuns outfit with a saintly look on her face? I mean, when have you ever seen a nuns outfit it wipedown leather, with stiletto boots and leather prayer beads?
And the fragrance of the last verse that actually states it is about a black velvet cake!
I think we can all see the subtle hints and indeed know what this is about a love egg, ribbed for her pleasure!
😃
That took me about half an hour to write because I had to stop and wipe my eyes from laughing so much!
And I finally get to read one of yours where I don't need a proper grown up with me or getting all flusterated and raspberry faced!
Now I could really go for munching down some of that sweet velvety goodness and ARGHH! I knew it! I've caught innuendoitis! (It's like the sexy version of seeing everything through Rose tinted glasses. I think they call it nymphomonacles or something similar! 😃
So very well done PB. Now go get hosed off and make your way to the not so naughty step!
😃

[Poetic Beauty]

When I said I would write a poem about chocolate cake just for you I never said it would have a PG rating lmao 😜 PS I sure hope the cake wasn’t made with pleasure eggs 🤣🤣🤣

[Poetic Beauty]

And I will have you know my glasses are tinted violet purple and crimson red with a hint of sky blue

[Lorry]

True, you did not. I half expected it to be one of those rudely shaped cakes people are always posting their ire about on that interweb thingy... I thing they call them something like chocolate bildo cakes, but come to think of it I think they spell chocolate without a C! 😃

[Lorry]

You have vurpleroo glasses? Mine are only the rose tinted variety, which takes me back! 😃

[Poetic Beauty]

I use to have rose tinted glasses but unfortunately life has and it’s many trials has change the tint of those lol

[Michael Sun Bear]

Ok……I have read and reread a few of your poems, it’s 2am and I am packing a duffel bag and gassing up the car and heading out for corn country, IL. Your writing overflows with a sensuality that beckons like a dog in heat.

[Poetic Beauty]

Many of my poems are like that. They are extremely sensual.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Now I'm hungry. At least I do have doughnuts and coffee. ;) This was a fun and delicious offering. I enjoyed the read.

[Poetic Beauty]

I was a fun one to write. I’m glad you enjoyed it

[Fabian G. Franklin]

It's good to have fun doing what we love. It gives us the ambition to do more. I'm all about food. I love to cook and create. I have homemade oatmeal/raisin cookies in my pantry too. ;) They're right beside the doughnuts...all things in moderation. Everyone here (except me) is sick. I guess I'll make them chicken soup.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love to cook and bake as well. I need to be better about the moderation part but I’m slowly getting there lol

[Neville]

I may just be a fly on the wall but I feel like a gooseberry .. sorry for sneaking past the net curtain .. p.s .. I feel sure there's a job lot of wasps not far behind me 🐝🐝🐝🐝

[Poetic Beauty]

This is actually written about chocolate cake. I wrote it because of some friendly banter with Lorry lol

[Neville]

I neva woulda guessed 😉👍

[Dylan Macadham]

Haha, methinks we're not just talking cake here!
Decadently, loved it! :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Ahh but this one is actually about chocolate cake. Just done in a spicy way

[Dylan Macadham]

.........😅

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful imagery. Great setting of the mood and scene.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. Who doesn’t love a delicious sexy chocolate especially when you are trying to watch your calories lol

[Betty Hermelee]

very decadent indeed, making my mouth water, even sexy in it structure…I could take a sweet bite out of all of them, so tempting…quivering lips wait their turn for scrumptious sweets ……and the. black velvet cake you saved for last abd for good reason….. lovely
Warmly, B

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. This started out as banter with Lorry and I decided to actually write one about chocolate cake. It was a fun write. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I do believe we’ve all drooled over some cake in our lives

[Betty Hermelee]

indeed! A pleasure PB
Warmly, B

[Pete]

quite the sweet tooth. how come i never see this at any grocery store or bakery? i'm in need of a napkin to wipe up the spilled crumbs. probably some bad news at the next dental visit.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’ve seen cakes like this before but they are typically specialty cakes not something a grocery store would carry

[Pete]

let me know where. it's been a long, cold winter.

[Poetic Beauty]

You’d probably have to call an actual bakery and have one made or go to Paris lmao

[Pete]

everyone's a damned comedian. not funny when all i have is milo on my couch or bed with me to keep me warm.

[Poetic Beauty]

Well I’m alone 95 percent of the time and there is only one person who I’ve allowed in my room. I live with my mom and her husband because I don’t want to live alone. My only child is out on the east coast and not married or have an actual boyfriend so I get it

[Pete]

being alone does have its benefits but those times when we focus on it and crave to be with someone it can be unsettling.

[Pete]

being alone does have its benefits but those times when we focus on it and crave to be with someone it can be unsettling. i thank god for music and dogs. with my music i don't have to be alone.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like my solitude when I want it. I work second shift so the house is quiet when I come home at night and I have my own room to read or write or watch tv if I don’t feel like being social but I get too lonely if I’m completely alone

[Pete]

i used to different shifts as a security guard at a hospital when i was in college. third shift was the worst - trying to stay awake, plus it screws up your body's natural day and night clock.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’ve always been a night owl. My natural rhythm seems to be the nocturnal hours.

[Pete]

interesting...

[Poetic Beauty]

I get my best sleep typically from 3:00 am to 9 am. I’m more awake after Noon and I’m anxiety is lower after 3 pm. I write the best between 10 pm and 3 am

[Chris Shaw]

Black Forest gateaux, how I love thee. So so tempting. A taste on the lips, an inch in the hips. Who cares. I’m gonna dive in.
Delicious poetry PB.

Chris

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you enjoyed this poem. It was definitely a fun one

[Stella Armour]

decadent dark chocolate dripping from my lips .... the tingle of raspberries .... long time no taste but oh the memories 😋

[Poetic Beauty]

There is something special about a decadent chocolate cake. I haven’t had any for quite sometime either

[Stella Armour]

it's the dark chocolate bars that i buy and let the squares just melt in my mouth .... drooling happy 😋

[Poetic Beauty]

I love to let chocolate melt in my mouth there is something about the smooth silky texture