Decadent Antipaction

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A delicious temptation
Laid carefully in full view
Visually pleasing to the eyes

Delicate full curves beckon
Soft lips begin to quiver
In anticipation of a taste

The mouth waters with hunger
As the sweet morsel teases
In a beautiful display

Decadent layers lay perfect
Frosted in smooth chocolate
With intricate fancy ripples

A visually pleasing sight
Of a rich bittersweet fudge
Begging to be tasted fully

Topped with crimson raspberries
Plump and ready to be plucked
Off clouds of whipped cream

Oh scrumptious black velvet cake
How I want to devour you
With ravenous abandon

Reviews

[Gee]

Having been on a "16 hour" fasting diet since the beginning of January I could quite easily eat this poem and you too if you were sugar coated and stood still.for long enough:)
I'm constantly starving

[Dave W.]

I gained 5 pounds reading this, well done.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. Lorry actually gave me the idea for writing and erotic poem about cake of all things. Glad you enjoyed this poem

[Dave W.]

I imagine eating such things and then being haunted by Willford Brimley's ghost, hearing a faint "Diabeetus" in the room.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m am trying to be more careful about the food I get. I am portion controlling and trying not to over indulge on sweets daily but I haven’t completely cut anything out. Just limiting the amounts and how often. Chocolate especially cakes, brownies and muffins are my downfall

[Dave W.]

Mine are White chocolate chip cookies with Macadamia nuts