Mysteries of the Night Sky

The stars sparkle with wonder
As they shine ever so bright
Their light reveals a small glimpse
Of their vast knowledge and insight

A mystery plays on the stars
While the wind whispers secrets
It glides amongst the tree tops
A tune that calms, chaos within

Romance drifts across the brain
Pattern woven into the cells
A tangle of fiery forces
That engage the sleepy mind

A primal need arises
Beneath an indigo sky
Nerves set on rapid fire
As sapphire flames flicker and burn

Inner doubts quickly melt away
The turmoil becomes burnt ash
That scatters upon the wind
Only small fragments left behind

As desire calls from within
A blaze that lights the shadows
As it reaches crimson heights
ThT flutter with scarlet victory

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

My dear friend. To know and grasp the desire of passion. We need to do.
"A primal need arises
Beneath an indigo sky
Nerves set on rapid fire
As sapphire flames flicker and burn"
I liked the complete poem my dear friend. The above lines are so wonderful. A indigo sky and a love near.
Paradise my friend. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for romance.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

There is something magical about encounters under an indigo sky with a warm summer breeze or embraces in the afternoon sun with the light touching skin.

Most of us need those encounters of passion and a warm lovers touch.

[emmajoygreen]

'As desire calls from within
A blaze that lights the shadows
As it reaches crimson heights
ThaT flutter with scarlet victory'

Your final stanza goes 'pow! - reminding the reader that you have cleverly built up and up need and heat of emotions gone wild. I note you posted this in June.. just proves that mid-Summer can and does sizzle!

[Poetic Beauty]

June can get quite warm here but it was exceptionally hot. We had a several triple digit days

[Mk.t.g]

loved the read, so muchhhhhhh!!!!

[Poetic Beauty]

I often write about the moon, stars and the wonder of night.

[Mk.t.g]

which is why you've got such a good eye for wording imagery.

[FlaLover]

Beautifully written!
Reading this caused me to daydream!
I love it!

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the night sky in all its mystery and beauty

[Soren]

Nature's passion ignited by starlight. A most sensuous and seductive poem of a most vivid nature. Loved the imagery in this one as it seemed to build from a spark to a glowing ember and then into a blaze. Beautiful.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for your kind words. I’m glad you enjoyed this poem.

[Relic]

Ah, a beautiful poem, PB. The night sky full of stars is a vision of the past. Scientists may continue to find more galaxies full of stars out there as the years unfold. Light pollution prevents me from seeing the stars the way I used to. But some still remain that I can see. The night sky is truly wonderful for those that appreciate it.

Great poem, PB.

[Poetic Beauty]

I am fortunate that I don’t have too much light pollution and can see a lot of the stars at night. I love be looking at them!

[Ken Simm.]

I would like to be associated with the beautiful remarks above. I also think it is wonderfully bright, romantic and sparkling.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you Ken for your extremely kind and wonderful review. I think we all want someone to feel us in that fiery yet deeply woven way. For reasons unclear to me Mr Blue Eyes has made me feel this way for over three years. Sigh it’s so baffling and spellbinding as well.

[Ken Simm.]

Lucky you and you are welcome.

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. You paint this scene well and make it come to life—tremendous work.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you found this powerful. Thank you for your kind review!!

[Mystical Ink]

The imagery of stars, wind, and fire conveys a journey from mystery and serenity to intense passion and ultimate triumph. Your use of nature to mirror inner feelings is both powerful and deeply moving.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you!! Many times I will use forces of nature to convey the emotional feeling. I believe it allows the reader to understand and feel the intense emotions

[Amy R]

Wow, another great write...
This poem captures the beauty and mystery of the world around us..
"A primal need arises
Beneath an indigo sky
Nerves set on rapid fire
As sapphire flames flicker and burn" beautiful stanza,.

Great write.
-Amy

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you liked that stanza. It has some of my favorite lines in this poem.

[Amy R]

No problem.

[Pete]

nights were made for romance. you bring it alive to the forefront.