Bright Star

For my Niece Kay

Oh, little bright star
That shines so bright
Why can you not
See your own light

It beaming with rays
Brilliant and white
Glowing beautifully
A stunning sight

A twinkle that glows
Dancing with glee
A shiny speck
For all to see

Oh, little bright star
That shines so bright
Why can you not
See your own light

It’s filled with love
A warmth aglow
A sparkle at night
That always shows

It silvery gleam
Beams in the night
That lights a path
With bright white light

Oh, little bright star
That shines so bright
Why can you not
See your own light?

Reviews

[DIVYA]

This was such a motivational read. The star is the epitome of brightness and yet it is sadly unable to appreciate its own power. A deep metaphor that was treated beautifully here, it reminds me of those who give light to others inspite darkness looming within them. This is a very noble quality but not always good for those who posses it. They must be reminded of their light, their beauty and goodness. It also reminded me of a loved one who lost her life convinced there was no light in her though she was the brightest and best. A poem that speaks to the reader deeply and has beautiful wording, flow and rhyme.

[Poetic Beauty]

My niece is struggling and is receiving treatment for her depression at the moment. She is a hyper-intelligent, kind and funny girl and I hope and pray she knows just how much this world and our family need her!!

[DIVYA]

I understand the pain of depression. I'm sure her family and loved ones are telling her how much she's loved and needed, everyday. She'll need constant assurance till she gets back her confidence and strength to fight the depression. I wish her all the very best in life and your family too.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you kindly. Depression is definitely a struggle and I hope she will soon be back to her normal self.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like this. Stars and candles only burn by consuming the fuel they need. Even the universe has a hierarchy of existence and the light of today pales before a brighter tomorrow. But tomorrow is not today and we must wait, we must endure, we must survive the night if we are to witness the dawn.

[Poetic Beauty]

Star are amazing

[Marie]

A very finely penned allegorical write. It is very rare for any human being to see their own light. Other people's inner light may be visible to them, but not so their own. We rarely acknowledge the power we have within ourselves, but marvel at the power we see in others. We seldom believe in our own strength but never fail to be amazed at the strength we perceive in others. We are made of the same 'stuff' as the stars, yet we see and revere their beauty, but do not concede to our own. Lovely poem and depiction. Thank you for sharing, dear poetess...

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for you insightful and kind review

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear poetess

[Gee]

I know a few who struggle with self worth, lack of self esteem and no matter what said to them they will not or cannot change, quite sad. I will screen shot this to show to a friend if okay with you.
Good morning

[Poetic Beauty]

That is perfectly fine with me. I don’t mind you sharing my poem with someone else. And thank you for the kind review. Many who don’t see their worth struggle with depression or some form of mental illness and it is hard to see someone you love struggle with those things that make them feel so sad or unworthy

[Gee]

Tis now framed in her office

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad she liked the poem and hopefully it will give her a daily reminder that she shines even if she doesn’t see her own bright light

[Amy R]

A very beautiful poem,
I liked how warm and smooth flowing this poem is..
Nicely inked.
-Amy

[Poetic Beauty]

I wrote this for my niece. Sometimes she doesn’t see how brightly she does shine.

[Amy R]

Totally get that, very nice.

[Soren]

A poem that reads as a song. Motivational and inspirational for all those that do not see their own value such a great metaphor. Star light is small but still their and like us when added together with the light of others it makes a great difference. Very nicely worded and with such a nice flow.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you!! I wrote this one for my niece

[Mystical Ink]

Your poem was a pleasure to read. It effectively captures the metaphor of a bright star, prompting contemplation on self-recognition and inner radiance. It beautifully explores the journey of self-discovery and self-appreciation.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for stopping in to read my poem. I’m glad you like this poem about the bright star!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful lullaby for your niece Kay. I enjoyed the dance of words and thoughts my friend. This would be wonderful verbal poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you!! I did a hand written copy for her and gave it to my sister to give to her.

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem and you are welcome dear poet.

[tumi]

its filled with love, a warmth a glow
were my favorites
excellent ideas to put into writing

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I am fond of those lines as well

[tumi]

u are welcome and thanks for sharing :)

[Betty Hermelee]

You bring this star to life like a human who cannot see the good in her...she must be reminded time after time why she cannot see the light in her soul....i like the repetition and the flow of this lovely poem....some people cannot see the bright light in them...they have to be reminded....
Warmly, B

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. She is definitely struggling to see her light at the moment

[Betty Hermelee]

You are very welcome PB!
Warmly, B

[Pete]

very cute and telling of self worth. reminded me of twinkle, twinkle, little star. smooth read with a nice flow.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you kindly