Bright Star

For my Niece Kay

Oh, little bright star
That shines so bright
Why can you not
See your own light

It beaming with rays
Brilliant and white
Glowing beautifully
A stunning sight

A twinkle that glows
Dancing with glee
A shiny speck
For all to see

Oh, little bright star
That shines so bright
Why can you not
See your own light

It’s filled with love
A warmth aglow
A sparkle at night
That always shows

It silvery gleam
Beams in the night
That lights a path
With bright white light

Oh, little bright star
That shines so bright
Why can you not
See your own light?

Reviews

[AYVID N]

This was such a motivational read. The star is the epitome of brightness and yet it is sadly unable to appreciate its own power. A deep metaphor that was treated beautifully here, it reminds me of those who give light to others inspite darkness looming within them. This is a very noble quality but not always good for those who posses it. They must be reminded of their light, their beauty and goodness. It also reminded me of a loved one who lost her life convinced there was no light in her though she was the brightest and best. A poem that speaks to the reader deeply and has beautiful wording, flow and rhyme.

[Poetic Beauty]

My niece is struggling and is receiving treatment for her depression at the moment. She is a hyper-intelligent, kind and funny girl and I hope and pray she knows just how much this world and our family need her!!

[AYVID N]

I understand the pain of depression. I'm sure her family and loved ones are telling her how much she's loved and needed, everyday. She'll need constant assurance till she gets back her confidence and strength to fight the depression. I wish her all the very best in life and your family too.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you kindly. Depression is definitely a struggle and I hope she will soon be back to her normal self.

[Yana Larson]

This poem is a gentle and encouraging meditation on self-worth, written with a simplicity and grace that gives it a timeless quality. The repetition of *“Oh, little bright star / That shines so bright / Why can you not / See your own light”* adds a musical, lullaby-like rhythm that feels both comforting and tender.

Its tone and focus on natural imagery are reminiscent of William Blake and Sara Teasdale, poets who often celebrate beauty and purity with a sense of wonder. The poem’s consistent structure and soothing rhyme scheme make it almost chant-like, emphasizing its message of quiet reassurance. Through the star, the poem beautifully speaks to anyone who struggles to recognize their own brilliance, offering a reminder of inherent value and radiance.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you saw the big picture in this poem and liked the musical flow of this poem. I wrote it for my niece who was struggling deeply

[Yana Larson]

I hope your niece is feeling better. It's wonderful that you're supporting her. It is SO SWEET! Good luck in your artlife. And best wishes for your niece!

[Mk.t.g]

"Why can you not
See your own light"

i dont know why but these resonated with me so much, i mean, so many people around you feel insecure and less worthy of getting anything positive. you begin to think why is it that they you can see thier bright glow raditing form all corners, yet they fail to notice it??

on a side-note, loved the poem, and they way you worded it, honestly!!

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. There are many in this world that don’t see their own light. I’m glad you liked the words written here

[Mk.t.g]

your welcome

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like this. Stars and candles only burn by consuming the fuel they need. Even the universe has a hierarchy of existence and the light of today pales before a brighter tomorrow. But tomorrow is not today and we must wait, we must endure, we must survive the night if we are to witness the dawn.

[Poetic Beauty]

Star are amazing

[Marie]

A very finely penned allegorical write. It is very rare for any human being to see their own light. Other people's inner light may be visible to them, but not so their own. We rarely acknowledge the power we have within ourselves, but marvel at the power we see in others. We seldom believe in our own strength but never fail to be amazed at the strength we perceive in others. We are made of the same 'stuff' as the stars, yet we see and revere their beauty, but do not concede to our own. Lovely poem and depiction. Thank you for sharing, dear poetess...

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for you insightful and kind review

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear poetess

[Gee]

I know a few who struggle with self worth, lack of self esteem and no matter what said to them they will not or cannot change, quite sad. I will screen shot this to show to a friend if okay with you.
Good morning

[Poetic Beauty]

That is perfectly fine with me. I don’t mind you sharing my poem with someone else. And thank you for the kind review. Many who don’t see their worth struggle with depression or some form of mental illness and it is hard to see someone you love struggle with those things that make them feel so sad or unworthy

[Gee]

Tis now framed in her office

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad she liked the poem and hopefully it will give her a daily reminder that she shines even if she doesn’t see her own bright light

[Amy R]

A very beautiful poem,
I liked how warm and smooth flowing this poem is..
Nicely inked.
-Amy

[Poetic Beauty]

I wrote this for my niece. Sometimes she doesn’t see how brightly she does shine.

[Amy R]

Totally get that, very nice.

[Soren]

A poem that reads as a song. Motivational and inspirational for all those that do not see their own value such a great metaphor. Star light is small but still their and like us when added together with the light of others it makes a great difference. Very nicely worded and with such a nice flow.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you!! I wrote this one for my niece

[Mystical Ink]

Your poem was a pleasure to read. It effectively captures the metaphor of a bright star, prompting contemplation on self-recognition and inner radiance. It beautifully explores the journey of self-discovery and self-appreciation.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for stopping in to read my poem. I’m glad you like this poem about the bright star!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful lullaby for your niece Kay. I enjoyed the dance of words and thoughts my friend. This would be wonderful verbal poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you!! I did a hand written copy for her and gave it to my sister to give to her.

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem and you are welcome dear poet.