Cosmic Strings

A single midnight blue ribbon
Is wrapped around purple twine
A pattern woven together
Of Universal cosmic strings
That are invisible to the eyes

They float effortlessly in waves
As they design intricate knots
Held, combined with divine knowledge
From the Creator of all life forces

Precise intersection of beings
A perfect timing in nature
To heal, one, along the journey
And guide with spiritual wisdom

Delicate markings, yet firmly hold
Their exact shape as they collide
A Force that isn’t clearly seen
Has a perfect plan for this path

Event in life that’s unexpected
His purpose not yet been revealed
Even this his ribbon is tightly knotted
To this complex violet thread

Mystery yet to be unraveled
As they merge in this moment of time
Forever leaving small fibers behind
Lessons and gifts given to each other.

Reviews

[Poetic_Vixen]

This poem, as I read, is saturated with effervescence of romance, with the lover's tied with ethereal divine blue lace, I love how it binds spiritually, making it a bond destined by time, unable to be broken away easily. Your poem often has exceptionally beautiful descriptions of romance and passion, it's always a treat to read!

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you think so. This one took some work mentally and creatively to get the idea out. It is romance and unexpected chance meeting. Also i truly believe their is a reason we a brought certain people into our lives gift or lesson sometimes both.

[Poetic_Vixen]

When they are both a lesson and gift, it is sort of a bittersweet blessing worth keeping to the ends of time. I love this idea of your poem.

[Poetic Beauty]

Sometimes lessons are cruel. Sometimes they are meant to show us the beauty we hold from another person’s eyes. Give back our self confidence and passion for life in general

[Poetic Beauty]

Are not cruel

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! What a review from DGD; a,slap in the face.
Best wishes answering him.

[Poetic Beauty]

I did answer him and I have thick skin. You can read my reply. Shrug I don’t really care. My work and words stand for themselves. I know my flaws especially with flow it’s never completely smooth, sometimes my wording gets wonky and oh the typos. I use to harsher criticism and I know my spicy poems aren’t for everyone lol

[Sami Khalil]

I will and I'm proud of you. You go poet.

[Poetic Beauty]

He’s just angry. There were some words that were said in a post that didn’t sit well with me either regardless of him being an asshat. I simply didn’t engage in the commotion

[Sami Khalil]

I saw that; it triggered his anger.
Best wishes with people like that.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m an Aquarius and I see all side of the spectrum. I understand everyone being angry about his words and be pitting people but sometimes things can be taken too far. Yes he has a superiority complex and is bulling but there are ways of handling it without completely tearing his life apart in the process. Anyway rant over. His angry doesn’t affect me in the slightest

[Sami Khalil]

Good to know. You know how to handle those types.

[Poetic Beauty]

He’s degrading my work not my character or intelligence.

[Sami Khalil]

I love that perspective and self confidence

[Sami Khalil]

I saw where he called another poet old and fossilized; that was rude and mean.

[Poetic Beauty]

It is rude and mean. I try not to be that way but let me tell you if he criticized my character or my intelligence it would be handle in a different manner completely

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy woooo. I don't doubt it.

[John the Baptist]

This one has a mystic sound to, maybe something of a statement of faith. It speaks of a unification of all things and purposes. What seems now a mystery will be revealed in time. The patience to wait for it is what is called faith.

[Poetic Beauty]

It has a bit of my faith I it and the belief that we are all connected by the divine Creator even though we don’t know why we intersect with people at certain times.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! I was thinking Einstein was giving a lecture which is so true and scientific. You write it down in a marvelous poetic way.
It is all about waves and intersections.
Long live science and physics.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for you kind review and words!!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[AYVID N]

Dear Poetic Beauty,

Cosmic strings...intricately conceptualized by you in very well thought out, choice words.

The cosmos is a truly undefined space so it was interesting how with words you gave it pattern, colour and plan.

Delicate, yet firm, tight yet not binding, such is the power of the universe. Such food for thought, such inspiration dwells in your words.

I loved this poem for how it expanded my mind and took me to so many relatable places.

Beautifully penned!

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for your kind words. This one took some work to get it done and it still needs a little tweaking. It is definitely a deeper thinking poem.

[AYVID N]

I enjoyed the read and thoughts. You're most welcome.

[Sapphus]

Cosmic strings flow, wind-unwind, play harp but never stay twined for too long. Complex words made thoughtful.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for your kind review.

[Vol]

PB,
Spiritual ribbons braided together... Those "things" that make us... the ones that cannot be seen, love, hatred, anger, depth, joy... those things science cannot measure, so cannot understand, the only eternity we can claim. The most important parts of us.
Vol

[Poetic Beauty]

This one was a bit deeper in thinking for me and took some work and there are a few things I will probably tweak later on. For me this is the Divine Creator and His unseen weaving for lives

[Poetic Beauty]

But you are definitely correct in the fact that our emotions and what is in our depth that science can not explain is truly what make a person a person!!

[Vol]

PB,
Well done! Teak? I know what you mean! I do so almost every time I read one I wrote before.
No poem is EVER finished.
Vol

[Poetic Beauty]

Tweak this f*****g phone and typos grrr

[Vol]

PB!
You have a f*****g phone? I want one! I bet they are expensive, I'd keep mine on vibrate ALL THE TIME... Sigh... T Mobile? Verizon? ATT? Oh, NO! I bet it's an Apple! Probably have to be careful when you take it out in public, though. Disruptive at work, too, I bet... everybody in the bathroom all day!
hahaha!
Vol

[Poetic Beauty]

Yeah it’s an Apple and it is typically set on vibrate but I can’t have Mr Blue Eyes ring tone going off at work. Halestorm I get off wouldn’t be appropriate lol haha

[Pete]

very cool poem and thoughts. quite deep as it takes us into a different realm. you're tugging at the core of existence, purpose and meaning. we may not understand why things are happening but the master architect of all does. by now, you know how my mind works so shouldn't be a surprise when i tell you that this is a new favorite of your's for me. top notch stuff.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad this is a new favorite for you. It took some work to get it this way and I know there is some tweaking I have to do.

[Soren]

A great analogy beautifully written. I loved the first stanza:
"A single midnight blue ribbon
Is wrapped around purple twine
A pattern woven together
Of Universal cosmic strings
That are invisible to the eyes"
Beautiful images here.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. It was a bit of a deeper thinking poem for me

[Mauricio Montoya]

Whoa PB! This deep, now I don't if its erotic love. As I have read your work and if it is it a deferment way to see it but I think its a love we can't see
We've been struggling to find
Yet right in front of us, we don't see
We need to see what we have
Between us, before we attack
What in front of everyone.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for sharing

[Poetic Beauty]

It is the deep thought of everyone we meet has a reason and a timing for it. Look up the String theory

[Poetic Beauty]

This is about Mr Blue Eyes and that he has a reason for showing up in my life when he did.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Oh PB the only string theory I have is hug you for a great time and good read.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you enjoyed this poem and found it beautiful and hugs to you as well my dear friend

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yeah thanks have you read some of Emma work, good read.

[Poetic Beauty]

Yes I read a lot of Emma’s poems. I love her work!!

[Patricia Wedel]

Dear Beauty.. to guide with Spiritual Wisdom is a Gift Divine. There are Cosmic Strings to those entwined. gently, Pat

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you liked this poem. Thank you for your kind words and review