Inner Emotion

How do I begin to uncage this emotion?

My inner muse is fiercely pissed
Angry that brain, is blocking emotions
From spilling out into the pages
Casting them skyward into the night

She’s spitting mad at the reluctance
Eager to release the trapped feeling
That dwells buried inside the fragile heart
Caged behind solid barriers

I’m raging a war within myself
Keeping ardent flavor at bay
Protected within a heart’s rib cage
Detaching the notion that it’s real

Reviews

[Gee]

Grief, loss, death are mainly the times when my pen writes without struggle, these writes for me my "better"(better than average) writes. Because this the case I guess the less I write the better:)
Not being a reader of anything much leads to my very simple way of writing, never ever used a thesaurus or dictionary when putting pen to paper.
Being a terrible reviewer I read much of many folks writing but seldom comment.
I have read and enjoyed most of your recent posts and have enjoyed the lovely feedback you get from all that visit.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you stopped by and left a message. When I first started writing I did use a thesaurus or dictionary. I do now. I use both plus a rhyming dictionary. I have a great fondness for words and reading both although I tend to read paranormal romance and fantasy romance. Anything that helps me escape to another world for awhile.

[Amy R]

It really be frustrating when we are trapped in our inner thoughts, and struggles to release,
but we must remember to calm our thoughts and be silent for a moment, just to feel peace and not feel at war with our thoughts in mind.
Nice write.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is definitely true.

[Amy R]

Yes, like past few days my mood been like this too, but i am working on not feeling this meltdowns.

[Poetic Beauty]

Yes I completely understand. I’m trying to teach my brain not to dwell on negative thoughts. This will take some time.

[Amy R]

It definitely will but I hope u get through soon. Take care

[Poetic Beauty]

I will. I have moody days here and there.

[Amy R]

Me too, so I understand

[Jibey]

The line 'My inner muse is fiercely pissed' hit me with some force... but it was such a telling word for the ranging drunkenness within, wanting to spill out in a stream of needful feelings... wanting to break out of the cage and find the freedom of an overwhelming f**k... Yes, that's the word that says it all... F**K. Total satisfaction.

[Poetic Beauty]

Not quite the word but if that is how you perceived it that is okay.

[Jibey]

Well, I thought it expressed well the primal strength of desire...

[Poetic Beauty]

It does and depending on our day and emotions it can be perceived many ways. I appreciate your honest review and that it made you feel primal deaire