Symphony of Emotions

A symphony of emotions swirl
Submerged inside my beating heart
Vibrating an undiscovered soft tune
Silk ardent notes bubble with delight

They flitter with an abandon joy
Singing verses of pure devotion
Freely pulsing without restraint
Chords flowing unfettered in the blood


A melody of magnetic pull
Begins tugging at my tiny heart strings
Playing an alluring bass filled tune
That resonates throughout my whole being

Silk rapid butterfly wings flutter
Causing my spirit to come alive
A slow awakening emerges
Forming a subtle shift in dynamics

These palpitations are blossoming
Booming behind my solid rib cage
As a power ballad Carrie’s on
Filling the mind with shaking awareness

Reviews

[Amy R]

What a beautiful piece.
Showcasing how love can be quite powerful and transformative. You wrote this very beautifully..
This poem explores heavily the depths and complexity of human emotions,
particularly love and passion.

Definitely enjoyed this a lot.
-Amy

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you so much for your kind review. I write about many different things. I tend to write what come to mind and then rearrange it until I get the wording and flow the way I want it. Love definitely feels like notes flowing through and body. Passion as well.

[Amy R]

Oh yes it feels exactly like that.
You're most welcome.

[Neville]

..................................... what's not to like .. feels good to me .. 😊👍

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m waging internal war over this whole notion lol 😝 i don’t want to feel love… long story

[willweb]

I found this piece alluring as music to me is always a part of everything that is inspired by romance as it is the melody of the heart that sings out when love's harmony is present. Well done.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you enjoyed this hearts song. And the poem as a whole. Thank you for reading

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was an interesting read and I enjoyed it but I'm afraid I was quite lost in, "Booming begins my should rib cage
As a power ballad Carrie’s on" I know the song Carrie by Europe and I know it's a "power ballad" but the preceding sentence didn't make sense to me. Did I miss something?

[Poetic Beauty]

It’s a typo and I will go back and fix it. I don’t have a computer and use my phone.