Elemental verses

The wind quietly gossips to the tree leaves
Telling stories of its many adventures
Swirling from one tree top to the next
Conveying its stunning discoveries

The leaves flitter about with excitement
Fluttering as the cool breeze speaks freely
Rustling amongst each other with jovial talk
Of delightment in new found knowledge

The deep bass of powerful thunder rumbles
Off in the distance of the horizon
Announcing his commanding entrance, royally
A dominance that draws complete attention

Humans unknowledgible of their language
But intently listens to their dialect
Hypnotized by their enthralling sound
That rattles across the charcoal ocean sky

Nature’s lullaby for bedtime music
As the unique notes meander on
Enveloping the nocturnal sleeping hours
In an orchestra of elemental verses

Reviews

[Perdition]

Ah...that first language of string and can...but such a rustling, a worrisome of conversation being what swings in this hopefulness and reality of perhaps a better artificial intelligence. A note in the dream perhaps ...Rumble on. Beautiful written as always~

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I wrote this after sitting outside on a warm night and a storm was coming in. Nature has its own beautiful language

[Perdition]

It does indeed...just ask those Mycorrhizal networks or mycelia..lol. Thanks~

[Poetic Beauty]

I always love hearing the thoughts that my poetry creates in your mind. I like hearing what different thoughts and ideas it creates within different readers. Yours are typically beautiful and different from others

[Neville]

So very atmospheric .. You made the whole thing come alive .. I could almost hear the rustle .. Neville

[Poetic Beauty]

Mature has its own language. For me it is calm and soothing.

[John the Baptist]

Sometimes it can seem as though nature is speaking to us through its sounds. I have no doubt that was why the ancients heard Zeus and Thor in the rolling thunder.

[Poetic Beauty]

I think nature has a language all of its own that we don’t understand

[Thomas W Case]

Amazing beauty here. I love it.

[Poetic Beauty]

I am terribly found of storms. I love to watch the lightning and listen to the thunder

[Dave Brown]

very nicely done, however did you see what a recent tornado did to a Midwestern (?) town

[Poetic Beauty]

I don’t watch the news much so I have not seen

[Pete]

interesting picture. there is undeniable power and strength in nature. the wind has authority over the leaves and thunder forces everyone to hear whether liked or not. great description of the elements.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for the kind review. It was warm and windy last night and I could hear the far off thunder and see the lightning on the horizon

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Always fond of pastoral verse, I enjoyed your poetic vision of the elements. Nicely done. F.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you enjoyed this natured filled poem

[Soren]

Stunningly beautiful in its portrayal of nature's majesty personified in a most identifiable way. It speaks deeply to the soul of our brotherhood to all around us but our ignorance of its language, the true language of poetry, internal and external. Images so commonly ignored taken for granted as it whispers to us in the background of our mind. A truly wonderful piece that speaks to my heart.

[Poetic Beauty]

I was sitting on the porch last night and the breeze was humid and warm. I was listening to it in the leaves and could heard the thunder that was off quite a ways and see the lightning flashing

[Soren]

Love those type of nights

[Poetic Beauty]

The weather yesterday and today are warmer than normal spring temperatures. High in the upper 70s ferh. We are getting storms off and on for the next few days coming out of the west