Display of Nature

Would you look at this…. It’s for everyone

The sun shines upon my winter skin
It’s glow glistens in the pale blue sky
Lighting the world with its intense burn
As birds flitter about randomly

Afternoon radiates summer heat
Spring breeze tickles my exposed neck
Cooling down my sweat caressed brow
As the temperature increases

The dirt beneath my fingers is refreshing
It’s slightly damp from previous rain
Small granules slide from my busy hands
As tirelessly dig in the ground

New flower bed causally emerges
As the top layers is removed
Clumps of green grass lay helplessly aside
Thrown together in a heaping pile

A day in the sunshine is pleasure
The natural smell graces my eager nose
Swirling around me in a vivid dance
A display of nature that calms my mind

Reviews

[Lorry]

I'd been saving reviewing on this until I found out what this sun is, or as I call it "heap big yellow fireball in sky!" 😀
The heap big yellow fireball in sky came out to play today, but so did the heap big frosty north sea wind, so I still don't really know, but it certainly prettier up the sky, which I just assumed was a slate grey accompaniment to life, but it did turn the palest of blues for a while, like someone had just taken it to the dry cleaners for a change.
But as you say in your last verse it sure does make the place smell as pretty as it briefly looked....very briefly! 😀

[Poetic Beauty]

It’s been chillier this weekend than last weekend but still around 65 degrees ferh. I was outside Sunday and Monday digging like a mole in the yard again

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like how you use sight, sound, touch, taste and smell...
that personifies nature and her interaction with the speaker here.

[Poetic Beauty]

I try to sues as many of the senses as possible so the reader can feel as if they are there

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Nature entertains...we should have to pay an admission charge for such beauty, especially when we so often take it for granted.
j.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love nature. I am continually working on the flower beds in the backyard. I seem to expand them each year. My mother loves her flowers and her flower bed but can on longer keep them up or expand them. I live with her so I do the flowers so she can enjoy them. But honestly I love the feel of the cool smooth dirt between my toes and my finger, the tickle of the grass on my feet.