Gray Morning

Gray Morning

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Embraced by a soggy morning
Heavy clouds filled with moisture
Hanging lower to the damp ground
They start to sporadically leak
Droplets plummeting to the earth

Humidity clings to the warm air
Thick with a foggy cool drizzle
The atmosphere is almost stagger
As the gray sky quickens its decent
Saturating the living world

Morning shifts calmly to afternoon
As the downpour ceases to exist
Leaving only puddles in its wake
As the wind builds up momentum
Bellowing its abrupt arrival

Blustery midday has turned cool
Warmth displayed with the rain
Chilling the bare skin with its touch
Icy fingertips glide lightly
Reddening exposed cold noses

A dreary spring day marches on
Souring the mood with slate color
And frosty temperatures that decline
Sleepiness washes over the mind
Creating the perfect days to slumber

© 2024 Poetic Beauty


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The way you have described something so simple was...breathtaking! Such vivid details and I felt I really was outside, standing on my porch experiencing this. I've been able to embrace the rainy days cause it's much better than snow. Grateful for Spring each year after the gloomy winter months. Beautiful to see color bring everything around you back to life!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Months Ago

I am not a fan of winter either. I enjoy the spring and a warm soggy morning that day however by the.. read more



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The way you have described something so simple was...breathtaking! Such vivid details and I felt I really was outside, standing on my porch experiencing this. I've been able to embrace the rainy days cause it's much better than snow. Grateful for Spring each year after the gloomy winter months. Beautiful to see color bring everything around you back to life!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Months Ago

I am not a fan of winter either. I enjoy the spring and a warm soggy morning that day however by the.. read more
The changing of the seasons can be so inspiring. Such a beautiful description of the world around us :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

I live in Illinois so we can have all four seasons in one day in early spring and late winter. Can b.. read more


I sometimes wish I was born a bear .. hibernation appeals come winter .. but on days like this (gray ones or sunny ones) it feels good to be alive again .. Neville

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

8 Months Ago


I too have a preference for warm and soggy, but gray one's aint too bad neither .. N :)
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Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

I like most weather except cold. Anytime it is cold 🥶 it agitates me lol and snow or any winter p.. read more
Neville

8 Months Ago


................ Cool :)
PB this is deep for me, love how it comes together he'll I've been in cold places but Grace of great spirit I found warmth even in this write I find hope, thank you for sharing your thoughts.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

I’m a warm weather person. Coll damp days I’m not fond of but they are great days for writing ab.. read more
Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

Cold* damp
Mauricio Montoya

8 Months Ago

Wet,dry lol
Great imagery of our spring days. I especially enjoyed the wording in the first two stanzas.
Nice piece.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

Here in Illinois the weather in the spring can shift rather quickly warm and rainy in the morning an.. read more
Yes perfect snuggling weather. To curl up under covers and lazy around.
What a cozy poem Poetic Beauty from a skilled hand.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

Those are good days for reading, writing and watching movies. This weekend was beautiful 75 Saturda.. read more
Cherrie

8 Months Ago

Yes for me too
The weather of early spring can be unpredictable. The weather described in this one sounds like what I am experiencing here in Virginia.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

The weather here in Illinois can be like that in spring as well. Bit bipolar
Here in Michigan. Spring had finally sprung. I like the days of Spring. I plant my sunflowers seeds and the wildflowers. Hello my friend and thank you for sharing your amazing poetry for the days of Spring.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

Today it is warmer and more spring like. That day start around 48 degrees and when the rain stopped .. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

Been lucky in Michigan this week. 70 degrees. Almost Spring my friend.
Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

It has been mid 60s to lower 70s this week as well I Illinois
Wow. Tremendous work. You paint this picture well.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

It was a dreary day that turned blustery and cold in the afternoon. Thank you for reading!!
Oh, I've had a few of these recently, but pray tell, what is this magical thing that happens of an afternoon where you speak of rain clearing? Here it is most likely on for the week at least, but if you believe the weatherologists, we are expecting a heatwave next week!!!
I've looked out my extra thick sweaters and waterproofs, just in case.
They said we'd be having sbow this week, so tmyes, I am currently rocking the t shirt snd shorts look right now! 😃


Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

Lo that explains your weather lol 😂 I do believe you would be Celsius. So we would have been 20 d.. read more
Lorry

8 Months Ago

Ahh. You'd think I'd know the difference with all the moaning I do about it! 😃
Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

lol too funny

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Added on April 6, 2024
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Tags: Rain, breeze, mist, nature, weather, mood

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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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