Immersion of Dreams

Written December 30, 2023

Life is an immersion of many dreams
Intertwining between night and day
Endlessly swirling with new beginnings


Chapters become filled pages
With completed magical stories
Scribbles across the mute nocturnal hour

Possibilities swirl with childish awe
A sparkle shimmers within the mind
Cascading with brilliant exclamation

Lines dancing with jolting exuberance
Telling tales of adventures to come
Slightly veiling the future from sight

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Such a lovely tribute to life and the living of it. Laughter and love; friends and family, the warmth of a hug or a smile, these are the treasures that should fill our days and make our dreams worthwhile. We need someone to believe in us even when "we" have our doubts. And at least one hope that will always stay when all the rest run out.

[Poetic Beauty]

Im glad you liked this poem. Dreams are what fuel us in this life and get us to the next point that is a little brighter

[Sami Khalil]

No truer words said; you filled the page brilliant takes on life. Life is more exciting with dreams and adventures.

[Poetic Beauty]

Life is definitely more exciting with dreams and adventures

[Sami Khalil]

All true and well said. You are welcome.

[Neville]

this is evidently one of those one could easily immerse themselves and then become lost in .. and correspondingly enjoyed very much .. Neville

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m am glad you got lost and enjoyed this poem. Sometimes I like to write about a bit of magic and wonder. A new page to be written everyday if we truly think about it.

[Neville]

and why not .. let's go for it .. I am sure that sometimes I can fly

[Poetic Beauty]

We can fly in our dreams, writing and our minds

[Thomas W Case]

A triumphant celebration of life.

[Poetic Beauty]

Yes it is indeed. There is always a new page waiting to be written

[Re-Pete]

cool poem. uplifting and hopeful. as my muse thoreau wrote long ago, “Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake.”

[Poetic Beauty]

Life is continually and ever changing much similar to a book being written

[Ken Simm.]

Gossamer and yet sparkling crystal images fill this lovely write.

[Poetic Beauty]

Life is reminds me of a book continually being written and changed

[Betty Hermelee]

Life keeps changing, swirling to new heights and imaginations... new possibilities arise for one to grasp... new poetry and always dreams are changing constantly....brilliant thoughts emerge on the page ....and life is a combination of dreams and reality.
Lovely,
Warmly, B

[Poetic Beauty]

Life is much like a magical book always changing and being written

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome PB
Warmly, B

[Anita Frader]

Your pen is like a magic wand weaving words together that bring life to a page.

[Poetic Beauty]

Life is similar to a
Magical book

[Lorry]

Yes they are aren't they? For all I'd love to know what future paths hold, I reckon it's best we don't know what the future holds, because wouldn't it continually affect our present?
Keep dreaming those dreams and always say no thanks to spoilers. ☺

[Poetic Beauty]

It would be dull if we knew what would happen. I’m sure it would change the way we live our present. Pages are made to be written upon

[Lorry]

'Zactly! Nothing better than a brand new page to inspire us all. ☺

[Jibey]

You poems are always carefully constructed and painstakingly crafted. The image of a book with chapters and new pages, as one episode passes and another rolls in. I liked too the image of the child's wonder and the sense of excitement about what lies ahead.

Nicely done.

[Poetic Beauty]

My brain works in detail and it amazes me sometimes at the ideas and the way a piece turns out when it is finally done