Immersion of Dreams

Immersion of Dreams

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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Written December 30, 2023

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Life is an immersion of many dreams
Intertwining between night and day
Endlessly swirling with new beginnings


Chapters become filled pages
With completed magical stories
Scribbles across the mute nocturnal hour

Possibilities swirl with childish awe
A sparkle shimmers within the mind
Cascading with brilliant exclamation

Lines dancing with jolting exuberance
Telling tales of adventures to come
Slightly veiling the future from sight

© 2024 Poetic Beauty


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Such a lovely tribute to life and the living of it. Laughter and love; friends and family, the warmth of a hug or a smile, these are the treasures that should fill our days and make our dreams worthwhile. We need someone to believe in us even when "we" have our doubts. And at least one hope that will always stay when all the rest run out.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

Im glad you liked this poem. Dreams are what fuel us in this life and get us to the next point that .. read more



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No truer words said; you filled the page brilliant takes on life. Life is more exciting with dreams and adventures.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

Life is definitely more exciting with dreams and adventures
Sami Khalil

9 Months Ago

All true and well said. You are welcome.


this is evidently one of those one could easily immerse themselves and then become lost in .. and correspondingly enjoyed very much .. Neville

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

I’m am glad you got lost and enjoyed this poem. Sometimes I like to write about a bit of magic and.. read more
Neville

9 Months Ago


and why not .. let's go for it .. I am sure that sometimes I can fly
Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

We can fly in our dreams, writing and our minds
A triumphant celebration of life.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

Yes it is indeed. There is always a new page waiting to be written
Such a lovely tribute to life and the living of it. Laughter and love; friends and family, the warmth of a hug or a smile, these are the treasures that should fill our days and make our dreams worthwhile. We need someone to believe in us even when "we" have our doubts. And at least one hope that will always stay when all the rest run out.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

Im glad you liked this poem. Dreams are what fuel us in this life and get us to the next point that .. read more
cool poem. uplifting and hopeful. as my muse thoreau wrote long ago, “Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake.”

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

Life is continually and ever changing much similar to a book being written
Gossamer and yet sparkling crystal images fill this lovely write.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

Life is reminds me of a book continually being written and changed
Life keeps changing, swirling to new heights and imaginations... new possibilities arise for one to grasp... new poetry and always dreams are changing constantly....brilliant thoughts emerge on the page ....and life is a combination of dreams and reality.
Lovely,
Warmly, B

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

Life is much like a magical book always changing and being written
Betty Hermelee

9 Months Ago

You're very welcome PB
Warmly, B
Your pen is like a magic wand weaving words together that bring life to a page.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

Life is similar to a
Magical book
Yes they are aren't they? For all I'd love to know what future paths hold, I reckon it's best we don't know what the future holds, because wouldn't it continually affect our present?
Keep dreaming those dreams and always say no thanks to spoilers. ☺

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

It would be dull if we knew what would happen. I’m sure it would change the way we live our presen.. read more
Lorry

9 Months Ago

'Zactly! Nothing better than a brand new page to inspire us all. ☺
You poems are always carefully constructed and painstakingly crafted. The image of a book with chapters and new pages, as one episode passes and another rolls in. I liked too the image of the child's wonder and the sense of excitement about what lies ahead.

Nicely done.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

My brain works in detail and it amazes me sometimes at the ideas and the way a piece turns out when .. read more

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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

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