Winter’s Touch

Winter’s Touch

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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Written 1/12/2024

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The frosty temperature seeps inside
Burrowing it way into your bones
Squeezing out the body’s natural warmth

The wind whips violently without ease
Scattering the Arctic snow everywhere
It’s biting fingers freezing everything

White frozen orbs scatter lifelessly
In a mindless contorting rhythm
Leaving nothing safe from its death grasp

© 2024 Poetic Beauty


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This is actually one of my favourite writes of yours ,
it also reminds me that we have to have cold empty times for reflection and to know that a lovely more temperate mood will evolve from it ..
Winter to spring just sitting out the in-between moments.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

It amazes me how nature can spark inspiration for me. I’m glad you really liked this poem.
Stella Armour

9 Months Ago

Nature is the one thing that inspires poets after love ... :)



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mou
I'm not a great admirer of winter. Its numbness and silence are deafening. I love how you decipher its characteristics with a beautiful poetic touch.
- mou

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

Thank you. As you can tell from this poem winter is not my friend. We do don’t merge well or bond .. read more
mou

8 Months Ago

Yes, perhaps I can understand what you do really mean. I too find some of my shares in your strong p.. read more
Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

I do not like the cold and the snow. To me winter is barren; void of color.
Powerful work. Great use of the senses. I felt this one.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

I am not fond of winter nor the cold for that matter
Thomas W Case

8 Months Ago

Me either.
Winter does indeed have its drawbacks. Of course, come August, we'll be yearning for the cool breezes.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

I don’t mind the heat near as much. Really it doesn’t bother me until it get in the middle 90s
You describe a polar desert very well.

It's very well written, no wasted space... just enough to convey your message. Well done, this is good stuff.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

I do not enjoy the snow and the cold. Winter makes me feel like a withered house plant that need war.. read more
Davidgeo

8 Months Ago

Seasonal affective disorder is a pain in the a*s.

You're not alone though, humans d.. read more
Wow, it's been quite a while since I reviewed or read a poem, this was good. I wrote one called snowflake, if you can find it. If not no worries, reminded me of it. Thank you, great write!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

I write about many things. Nature seems to spark my imagination in a multitude of directions
Im His Daughter

9 Months Ago

Me too, I tend to write about that too. River, rocks, sunshine .. 🌞 Have an amazing day!
Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

Have a great day
This is actually one of my favourite writes of yours ,
it also reminds me that we have to have cold empty times for reflection and to know that a lovely more temperate mood will evolve from it ..
Winter to spring just sitting out the in-between moments.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

It amazes me how nature can spark inspiration for me. I’m glad you really liked this poem.
Stella Armour

9 Months Ago

Nature is the one thing that inspires poets after love ... :)


Its almost spring here .. and I cant remember the last time we had snow .. sometimes I think I may miss it .. but then I wake up .. anyway who needs it when we can visit it here .. Neville

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Months Ago


like I said .. live for now and enjoy it while you can
Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

I’m trying to live more for today. Not always an easy task to live in the moment but it is somethi.. read more
Neville

9 Months Ago


...... Just be sure neva to give up trying OK
I get cold chills just reading about it. My eldest daughter lives in the frozen north about 60 miles below the arctic circle...my granddaughter competes in dogsled races regularly. She told me proudly that she came in 7th in a five mile race and didn't turn her sled over once. And, she said, with two small dogs! She's eight and works with her loom weaving and a spinning wheel. I miss the lot of my grandkids forty-five hundred miles away but when my daughter calls and says it's thirty-five below zero there I'm like, wow, unbelievable that people live there. I reach for the thermostat if it drops below fifty outside. (laughing)

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

I can imagine living with temperatures like that as a normal. It get below zero here sometimes
The harsh and merciless cold. This could just be about the weather or a metaphor for the cold treatment we are subjected to by others

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

9 Months Ago

This about the cold weather but yes you are correct it could be about either topic
i hate that cold feeling in my bones and joints. i'm shivering as i read. a chilling dose of reality, maybe too real. definitely has bite and leaves its mark. makes us appreciate summer all the more although little consolation when we're freezing our fannies off ... :)

Posted 9 Months Ago



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Added on February 23, 2024
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Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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