Soulful storm

My mind ponders thoughts like thunder
Rumbling in many directions
Shaking my internal foundation
With deep subconscious reflection

Soul searching rises collectively
Springing forth out of the raging storm
Rejuvenating a stagnant life
With a spark of mindful lightning

The blustery thoughts bellow loudly
Whipping around the tender body
Trying to cause discord in life
But inner peace quiets the mind

A downpour of penetrating rain
Cleanses the dusty soul completely
Washing away yesterday’s stress
Leaving the aura shining bright

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too my dear friend.
"A downpour of penetrating rain
Cleanses the dusty soul completely
Washing away yesterday’s stress
Leaving the aura shining bright"
I believe I think too much. Need more action and less thinking about things. Hello from Michigan and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

Me too except when it’s a bad idea then I leap both feet in without a second thought 🤣🤣🤣

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I liked the contrasting lines in verse 2 and verse 4 where " Soul rising.... Raging storm" And then the soul cleansing and healing downpour.... Very engaging write here with perfect metaphors.

[Poetic Beauty]

That you. Many times soul searching can be chaotic and a whirlwind but on the other side of it usually comes peace

[Ken Simm.]

Some fine, lines, thoughts and images her my friend. All coming together in a satisfying whole for the reader.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I sat down and put pencil to journal and this is what came about

[Kerra]

Like the imagery you write with. enjoyed this write, it spoke to me

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you like the imagery painted in this poem. I try to reall write with senses so that the reader can step inside the words

[Kerra]

well you did a wonderful job :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you very much

[Ruth]

One image particularly here speaks volumes - the inner peace :) Inner peace is so very important to survive this realm :) Beautiful imagery within this piece :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. After soul searching and inner reflection when I come to a peaceful mind it is a celebration because many times my mind is anxious so these moments are precious to me

[Ruth]

I completely understand hon :) You are always welcome...

[Chris Shaw]

Those storm clouds can cause havoc. A mind brooding over thoughts. Where there is discord, let there be harmony. A metaphorical downpour cleanses, restoring bright aura and peace. A happy outcome PB.

Chris

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. Many times inner reflection and soul searching can be like braving a wild storm and on the other side we find peace many times

[Chris Shaw]

True enough. Always good to reach a positive outcome :)

[Poetic Beauty]

When a positive outcome is reached there is mimic how celebration because I have anxiety and over think everything lmao

[Chris Shaw]

Ha, I over think too :))