Spring Rain

The melodic sound of rain
Softly pelting the earth below
Soothing the chaotic soul
An anxious thought vanished

A tranquil sound vibrating
Nourishing trees and plants alike
A transformation glistening
Liquid peace covering the grass

Cool misty droplets are formed
Floating down from the gray clouds
As the night slowly settles in
Shifting the daylight murky sky

So petite in size and shape
Yet so essential to the world
Without it life would perish
Nothing left but dry parched land

Reviews

[Re-Pete]

all true. i love the rain and anything to do with nature. this is a terrific description of rain along with everything it gives and asks nothing in return. is interesting how when we get too much of it or not enough of it, it causes everything and everyone to get out of whack. terrific write ... :)

favorite -
Liquid peace covering the grass

[Poetic Beauty]

I love many things about nature. The rain the sun the night plants and so on

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing description of rain my dear friend. I loved how you used the language and I had read again. Rain can be our friend and our enemy. Past three years. Floods. Now our water levels are above normal in Michigan. Thank you my dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

It’s a delicate balance in nature and life

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend.

[Tertia]

I like the last line the best, but overall a beautiful piece

[Poetic Beauty]

That you. It’s a great remind of how we need so many things for the world and everything in it to survive

[Relic]

A beautiful way of describing a spring rain. I love rainy days and nights. There is indeed a peaceful feeling that seems to slow the world down. Letting people take a break. Leaves bouncing, puddles and tiny brooks forming in driveways...love it all.

[Poetic Beauty]

I have a fondness for weather and nature I general. Today I sat outside watching the clouds gather and form changing shape. It’s soothing for me and magical.

[sharonlee]

So soothing! I adore the rain... it nourishes both earth and spirit and shrinks the world to a misty view just beyond our windows...
A delightful read, thank you.

Sharonlee

[Poetic Beauty]

The rain is calming to me. Helps me to feel relaxed.

[Remanence]

A beautiful framing of the music of the rain. Well done.

[Poetic Beauty]

The sound of rain calms my mind and soothes my soul.

[Remanence]

Listening to the rain is like listening to the breeze blowing through the trees. It is restorative.

[Mauricio Montoya]

PB I myself don't care for rain I guess years of being homeless, but even the world needs to shed a tear for the sun to shine once again. thank you for sharing.

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome and I can understand why you wouldn’t particularly like the rain. For me it is soothing and calming but I’m not stuck out in it for hours with no dry clothes to put on.

[Mauricio Montoya]

yeah I can dig that side of it and it is what you make of it. again thank you.

[Kerra]

This is something to ponder on, I enjoyed this write

[Poetic Beauty]

I love to sit on the porch listening and watching the rain. It’s soothing

[Kerra]

yes it is.....

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love the rain
I used to sit on my verandah in my very old house fibro weatherboard with big wooden slats on verandah I’d sit there in rain with dog n pot plants wine in hand or tea and music or not was paradise
Loved your poem

[Poetic Beauty]

I would love to have a large veranda porch to sit on and watch the rain. It always calms me

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely stanzas here. What a difference a few droplets of rain can make to parched thirsty earth. I know you have an affinity with deserts, so there even more so. A few precious drops and the barren boredom can spring into a bursting flourish of greenery.

Chris

[Poetic Beauty]

I do have an affinity for the desert but I live in the Midwest and love the sound of rain and watching it. It is so vial and essential and yet many don’t think about it on the deep scale