Unconditional You

For my Beasty who is miles and miles away.

This is an exception for a moment
One in which I will speak freely
Today will embrace my thoughts
Letting my inner most feelings soar
Brought to life; pausing on the surface

It is forever unconditional
No restrictions on time or place
This feeling has a life of its own
Always beating in your direction
Singing a chord only for you

It doesn’t care about your flaws
Or the broken jagged pieces
Only a wild rawness is seen
The uniqueness that is solely you
The preying beast and the man, in whole

I accept the wild with the tame
The meltdowns with the blazing desire
Never questioning how I feel
It is unwavering and constant
Loving even when you are in doubt

This is no ordinary tale
For it is unconventional
It doesn’t fit into a standard box
Entirely contoured to you
Without reservation if it’s real

I understand you deep within
The charming with the fractured
The trepidation and the bold
I comprehend the questioning
And the pulling back, hesitation

You are you complete different
And that’s what draws me to you
Your heart, your soul, all that is you
Ahh, and your genuine smile makes melt
Leaving me in a state of bliss

Reviews

[olla]

this is very good.. seems it isn't really love that is the problem.. I am reminded of the adage "a bird can love a fish but where will they live.." I have loved several people in my lifetime but I couldn't live with some of them.. some are still friends and some are not.. but once I have come to love some one it doesn't ever seem to go away.. finding and learning to maintain healthy boundaries isn't always easy either.. I'm still working on that one..

[Poetic Beauty]

This is heart felt and is deeply woven into my center, my being. The problem isn’t that I can’t live be with him; it’s that he now lives so far away. Long complicated story that has lasted for over a decade

[olla]

yeah.. I got that.. there are all kinds of ways that we live with other people.. if you got the impression that I am not aware of where you are coming from.. I will send you a pm.. and perhaps you will better understand my comment..

[Nora]

Great and deep, I feel for you ❤️

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a very deep emotional poem. Every word is meant with every fiber of my being

[Nora]

Yes, I could feel that and I wish for you all the happiness 🤗🤗

[Viktoria]

Such a commanding series of verses.....the total adulation and commitment is easily understood in your lines; your beast, with all his positives and negatives still dominates the space in your heart.....and not even distance can drive a wedge in that mindset. Love over a distance is something to be admired. Withstand that and you can conquer anything. Bold words here, Poetic. I hope your beast reads them. 🌹

[Poetic Beauty]

He has read them. I sent this to him on Valentines Day. We haven’t been a couple for over 12 years now but I we still talk/message all the time.

[NotUsinganymore]

Very good poem about accepting those for who they are. It seems that there is often a divide.

[Coyote Poetry]

When the heart know bliss. Can't be stopped.
"You are you complete different
And that’s what draws me to you
Your heart, your soul, all that is you
Ahh, and your genuine smile makes melt
Leaving me in a state of bliss"
I liked the above lines and I understand them. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

Your review makes me smile. I’m glad you know the feeling.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem dear friend. A smile, can change our day.

[Poetic Beauty]

A smile can make a huge difference

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Soulmates are meant to love each other always, no matter the obstacles, the interruptions, the hearts are bonded in that mysterious way that says...we will never forget each other even when we are out of each other's lives.
I understand this...have been there, still am.
j.

[Poetic Beauty]

At least I am able to talk to mine. It’s a blessing in itself

[Neville]

.............. a captivating post and much enjoyed by me ma'am ...

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for reading

[Neville]

... my absolute pleasure

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love is a mystery. You can love someone even if you don't like soemething about them.
another great poem

[Poetic Beauty]

Somethings never change... same person same distance just years later lol

[AJNJ]

I read this poem more than once and the comments too. I just have to say it's beyond beautiful what you share with your soulmate and very inspiring too. Understanding and selflessness goes a long way in keeping love alive and thriving.

[Poetic Beauty]

There are many kinds of love and all felt on different depth levels. This one has last for years even though we are no longer in the same location and aren’t together. We find solace in each other.

[Davidgeo]

There is love with the lowercase l and there is Love with the capital L. One is just a chemical reaction compelling an animal to breed and pass it's genetics on; the other is much different, the romance of attraction is a specifically human emotion and not completely understood, maybe even not completely understandable. I think that capital L Love is a large part of what separates the human species from most, if not every other, species. I'm glad you can feel it so deeply to express it so well.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for your kind words

[Mauricio Montoya]

oh poetic beauty I remember when I first join this site i read "Solace in the sky" great piece, its been awhile since I've gotten in to any of your work, i mean get into i read it last night but didn't want to comment yet. Everyday is a new day I'm old, I'm back and you're still here, life can be cold its love and beauty within that makes it warm, an unconditional love trust in that never fail. I'm shelving this piece and thank sister for sharing.

[Poetic Beauty]

You are right about life being cold but love making it a warm place. I have my great love even though he is roughly now 1200 miles away and has been since I was 29. We always seek each other out. We message almost everyday and talk once in awhile. We are too far away for us to actually be together but we have an unconventional love that is for sure and well I’m the only person who can get him to read. He hates reading but will read my poems. Lol it’s always been that way.

It was good to see you around and I’m glad you enjoyed this poem.

[Mauricio Montoya]

it comes from heart.