Spectural Dreams

Spectryal dreams
Dance
Through the night

Shifting reality
Visions
Begin to flare

Haunting memories
Merge
Past with the present

Risidual Love
Confuses
the calm mind

Questions forming
Endless
Sing to the heart

Boundless Time
Moves
In reverse

Scenes Forming
Creating
Unwelcomed thoughts

Whispering Breathes
Silelntly
Into deaf ears

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

at the most inopportune times those thoughts of the past whisper through the silence and bring those unwelcome thoughts...

life going in reverse instead of straight ahead...our tires stuck in the mud of past transgressions,

it is really when our mind needs four wheel drive, to move on.

[Poetic Beauty]

Unfortunately dreams tend to move in all directions and have no concept of four wheel drive.

[Crowley]

Its really the merging of the that past and that present that coalesce into what we are. We deal with the past better if we realize that it is just that, the past. Chasing demons undermines our ability to enjoy the present, easier said than done though. Great Writing Kristina.

[Adam Adams]

Dreams're only the escape of wickedness and reluctance of unwelcomed thoughts & the reason of nightmares as well which come forward in disguise of "spectural dreams". You've collected all of the pieces your dreams and nicely rippled 'em to your poetic art. It also makes a vivid imagery in mind 'bout the echoes of love. Well written.

[I Am Svetlana]

I never seem to fully remember my dreams anymore, even the best ones. Anyways, I loathe the feeling of the past creeping in at night and trying to take over your mind. Making you think things you shouldn't or that you know aren't true. Just gotta keep your head up and keep believing in yourself and all will end on a good note.

[An owl on the moon]

Dreams are so fierce and free... a seeming escape from the everyday, though often haunting when awakened again. You words breathe life into these visions.. these emotional streams flowing across our mind. Dark and moving...

[Poetic Beauty]

Dreams are very mysterious and bring up memories when least expected.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

really liked your poem enjoyed reading it.... :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I'm glad you enjoyed reading this poem

[Sami Khalil]

Your writes are spectacular and boundless. I enjoyed this tremendously...:)....

[Poetic Beauty]

Many of my poems are written from my dreams and that is why they have the surreal feeling too them.

[A. Amos]

Always a unique and magical experience while entering in the world you create via your writing...bravo!

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you find this piece a magical transport.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear. .